for The Darkness Within:The Rewrite6/9/2010 c7 Proof
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! :)
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! :)
6/8/2010 c7 
6kamuinoyume
Aw, I love reading about the Dark Lord and his son, it's just so cute. I noticed that you've changed a lot of this chapter and am anxiously awaiting to see what other changes you come up with.
6kamuinoyumeAw, I love reading about the Dark Lord and his son, it's just so cute. I noticed that you've changed a lot of this chapter and am anxiously awaiting to see what other changes you come up with.
6/8/2010 c7 8bkwrmgrl87
The chapter was superb as usual, so thank you for the lovely update! Thanks so much for all the added stuff, so fun to rediscover this new version of The Darkness Within. I don't have anything more to add except the PoV changes aren't very professional when they are one persons then anothers without any prior indication of that happening. The example I would give to that is when Harry and Voldemort are talking and it's in Harry's PoV but then all of a sudden it's Voldemorts and switches back and forth.
"Voldemort didn't speak at first, but his gaze stayed on Harry, noticing the small details that others like Bella and Lucius missed. He saw the tiredness in Harry; his slightly unhealthy pallor and just the beginnings of dark shadows under his eyes."
Things like that, but other than that one thing it was brilliant as always and thanks for the wonderful chapter in th Harry and Ginny stories! I LOVE H/G pairing so thank you for that too!
~bkwrgml87
8bkwrmgrl87The chapter was superb as usual, so thank you for the lovely update! Thanks so much for all the added stuff, so fun to rediscover this new version of The Darkness Within. I don't have anything more to add except the PoV changes aren't very professional when they are one persons then anothers without any prior indication of that happening. The example I would give to that is when Harry and Voldemort are talking and it's in Harry's PoV but then all of a sudden it's Voldemorts and switches back and forth.
"Voldemort didn't speak at first, but his gaze stayed on Harry, noticing the small details that others like Bella and Lucius missed. He saw the tiredness in Harry; his slightly unhealthy pallor and just the beginnings of dark shadows under his eyes."
Things like that, but other than that one thing it was brilliant as always and thanks for the wonderful chapter in th Harry and Ginny stories! I LOVE H/G pairing so thank you for that too!
~bkwrgml87
6/8/2010 c7 3Go10
This chapter is the first time so far that I've noticed a big difference from the original story. I like it.
3Go10This chapter is the first time so far that I've noticed a big difference from the original story. I like it.
6/7/2010 c7 starrgirl29
:D I'm really liking this story. Interesting, I thought that Harry didn't know he wasn't REALLY LV son. Excited to see how you progress this!
:D I'm really liking this story. Interesting, I thought that Harry didn't know he wasn't REALLY LV son. Excited to see how you progress this!
6/7/2010 c7 Die in a hole with Penguins
That was amazing I wasn't expecting Harry to know that James was his biological father. I Love the relationship Voldemort and Harry have, it's cute.
That was amazing I wasn't expecting Harry to know that James was his biological father. I Love the relationship Voldemort and Harry have, it's cute.
6/7/2010 c7 Akaalias
Just reread the original version of Darkness and am enjoying the rewrite. Love the Dark Prince series, one of the best HP fanfics.Ever.
Just reread the original version of Darkness and am enjoying the rewrite. Love the Dark Prince series, one of the best HP fanfics.Ever.
6/7/2010 c7 Saffygirl
I liked the changes you made with this chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
I liked the changes you made with this chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
6/7/2010 c7 JWOHPfan
Loved it, what a great chapter! Harry's playful interaction with Voldemort are such fun to watch!
Loved it, what a great chapter! Harry's playful interaction with Voldemort are such fun to watch!
6/7/2010 c7 Fenice
Heartbreaking
Heartbreaking
6/7/2010 c7 WETBOY
GREAT CHAPTER!
Keep up the great work and hope you update this and your others soon!
GREAT CHAPTER!
Keep up the great work and hope you update this and your others soon!