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3David Fishwick
Cool and please update soon thanks. I liked how you wrote Harry and the Malfoys in this chapter.
3David FishwickCool and please update soon thanks. I liked how you wrote Harry and the Malfoys in this chapter.
6/3/2010 c6 7Hope12
fantastic to be able to read this story over again new! I'm enjoying it just as much as I did the first time. thanks.
7Hope12fantastic to be able to read this story over again new! I'm enjoying it just as much as I did the first time. thanks.
5/31/2010 c4 6kamuinoyume
IT always seemed to me that your introduction of Harry as the Dark Prince was a little anti-climatic, but, then again, I doubt there was anyone who doubted that the Dark Prince was Harry to begin with, so, I suppose it fits. Bella's speech seemed slightly different in this chapter.
6kamuinoyumeIT always seemed to me that your introduction of Harry as the Dark Prince was a little anti-climatic, but, then again, I doubt there was anyone who doubted that the Dark Prince was Harry to begin with, so, I suppose it fits. Bella's speech seemed slightly different in this chapter.
5/31/2010 c2 kamuinoyume
I've always liked this chapter, don't know why, but even in the first fic, it just had a certain charm to it.
I've always liked this chapter, don't know why, but even in the first fic, it just had a certain charm to it.
5/31/2010 c1 kamuinoyume
Wow, the rewrite looks great! I remember the time I started reading the Darkness within, and while I did admire your skills to tell a story, the spelling errors were abyssal, but this looks nice and tidy. I like it!
Wow, the rewrite looks great! I remember the time I started reading the Darkness within, and while I did admire your skills to tell a story, the spelling errors were abyssal, but this looks nice and tidy. I like it!
5/27/2010 c5 nljfs
Even if we never see Aurors Nathan and Liam again, they should have last names... since you give everyone else one.
Even if we never see Aurors Nathan and Liam again, they should have last names... since you give everyone else one.
5/27/2010 c2 nljfs
If I remember correctly, Harry was turning 15, not 16 when the world cup was played... It's not really important, just a little jar to me when I read it.
If I remember correctly, Harry was turning 15, not 16 when the world cup was played... It's not really important, just a little jar to me when I read it.
5/26/2010 c6 3David Fishwick
I liked how you wrote the Potters in this chapter. Please keep up the good work as I am enjoying the story.
3David FishwickI liked how you wrote the Potters in this chapter. Please keep up the good work as I am enjoying the story.
5/26/2010 c6 dupel
Even though I read darkness within 3 times, but it was some time ago. So can't really spot any big differences sofar (might be a bit more detailed), but as always very very good =)
Even though I read darkness within 3 times, but it was some time ago. So can't really spot any big differences sofar (might be a bit more detailed), but as always very very good =)
5/26/2010 c6 Shaggy37
Outstanding chapter! James Potter and growing up sounds about as realistic as world peace!
Outstanding chapter! James Potter and growing up sounds about as realistic as world peace!