for The Darkness Within:The Rewrite5/26/2010 c6 
2annie2163
This is an amzing story! Usually I don't like dark Harry famfics, but you've pulled it off brilliantly!
2annie2163This is an amzing story! Usually I don't like dark Harry famfics, but you've pulled it off brilliantly!
5/17/2010 c5 26Fenice Eycritreau
That's too bad for a rewrite to spell "Pertificus Totalus! instaed of PetRificus... but still a good read !
26Fenice EycritreauThat's too bad for a rewrite to spell "Pertificus Totalus! instaed of PetRificus... but still a good read !
5/16/2010 c5 Brandyk
I have to admit that at the beginning it seems like reading the same fic was silly but then I love the original so I gave it a shot and I'm not disapointed! It's really cool to have the oportunity to start again this story seeing now things and happenings in the process.
Specially Voldemort part, 'cause the first time I was so inmerse in the Potter's reunion that I miss some of the Dark Lord's father moments and all the love Harry recieved.
Go on!
I have to admit that at the beginning it seems like reading the same fic was silly but then I love the original so I gave it a shot and I'm not disapointed! It's really cool to have the oportunity to start again this story seeing now things and happenings in the process.
Specially Voldemort part, 'cause the first time I was so inmerse in the Potter's reunion that I miss some of the Dark Lord's father moments and all the love Harry recieved.
Go on!
5/16/2010 c5 18aesylthryth
UPDATE! I'd like more of Damy and Meno's relationship, please! PLEASE! PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSE...
18aesylthrythUPDATE! I'd like more of Damy and Meno's relationship, please! PLEASE! PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSE...
5/16/2010 c5 2GoldenTresses91
Wow. This is pretty interesting... I never read the original, but this is quite good! Would you reccomend I follow this story, or try reading the other as well? Keep writing!
X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole
2GoldenTresses91Wow. This is pretty interesting... I never read the original, but this is quite good! Would you reccomend I follow this story, or try reading the other as well? Keep writing!
X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole
5/14/2010 c5 8bkwrmgrl87
I love this trilogy, and I like how you're going back and changing things so that I can reexpereince the excitement when I first found your work and started reading. It's weird that it was more than a year ago, where does the time all go? I love the changes in this chapter, and regardless of one reviewer saying they didn't see a difference I certainly noticed! That was cool that you changed things like locking windows and doors, smart move that. Did you change things when James and Harry interact? I can't recall, but anyway, I noticed and I like how it is and I'm so excited to see the other changes you said you would be making! I agree, you need to start a new story just because I'm very selfish like that. Although I read your authors note a while back and understand why you said you probably wouldn't, but I'm just self and greedy and would love it if you did. I need to go, just thought I would share my thoughs in a review here... thanks for the lovely story... again. Your readers adore you, old and new ones!
8bkwrmgrl87I love this trilogy, and I like how you're going back and changing things so that I can reexpereince the excitement when I first found your work and started reading. It's weird that it was more than a year ago, where does the time all go? I love the changes in this chapter, and regardless of one reviewer saying they didn't see a difference I certainly noticed! That was cool that you changed things like locking windows and doors, smart move that. Did you change things when James and Harry interact? I can't recall, but anyway, I noticed and I like how it is and I'm so excited to see the other changes you said you would be making! I agree, you need to start a new story just because I'm very selfish like that. Although I read your authors note a while back and understand why you said you probably wouldn't, but I'm just self and greedy and would love it if you did. I need to go, just thought I would share my thoughs in a review here... thanks for the lovely story... again. Your readers adore you, old and new ones!
5/14/2010 c5 March
Thankies!
Thankies!
5/14/2010 c5 49Smoochynose
Your Harry makes a good Dark Prince, even when he's a renegade dark Prince.
49SmoochynoseYour Harry makes a good Dark Prince, even when he's a renegade dark Prince.
5/14/2010 c5 3David Fishwick
I liked the chapter especially how you wrote the Dark Prince dealing with Hunt and the Aurors. Please write more thanks.
3David FishwickI liked the chapter especially how you wrote the Dark Prince dealing with Hunt and the Aurors. Please write more thanks.