
9/12/2010 c1
10HyourinmaruIce
I like your story. You are a great writer. I told you I would prove you wrong.
My dad tells me to watch the use of adverbs, and the word very. (Don't worry, I use adverbs once in a while too.) :)

I like your story. You are a great writer. I told you I would prove you wrong.
My dad tells me to watch the use of adverbs, and the word very. (Don't worry, I use adverbs once in a while too.) :)
7/29/2010 c1 random dude who just went on
i think your other story was significantly better xD but this was on my scale 5/10 :D you can do better! i know you can! Keep trying and you'll be great :D bye (like the idea how you say : gimme a R etc.)
i think your other story was significantly better xD but this was on my scale 5/10 :D you can do better! i know you can! Keep trying and you'll be great :D bye (like the idea how you say : gimme a R etc.)
5/25/2010 c1 Guest
lojkfqewao igras asrg
*Shock*
SO CUTE!
*squeal*
o.O Did i just do that?
Love it.
lojkfqewao igras asrg
*Shock*
SO CUTE!
*squeal*
o.O Did i just do that?
Love it.