for City of Connections7/2/2012 c1 Guest
I love Cassandra Clare and love any stories related to The Mortal Intruments.
Good Story:)
I love Cassandra Clare and love any stories related to The Mortal Intruments.
Good Story:)
3/6/2012 c14 blali
the first version is very good but the second one might be even better. Update soon, please:)
the first version is very good but the second one might be even better. Update soon, please:)
9/21/2011 c14 
2Alanna-Banana1987
The partial of the first chapter is starting off very well. :D PLZ PLZ PLZ keep writing!
2Alanna-Banana1987The partial of the first chapter is starting off very well. :D PLZ PLZ PLZ keep writing!
9/3/2011 c14 Brittm123
I Realllyy like this story! and the two new chapters you have written as like you rewriting it haha yeah, good job! :) ..subscribing,. this has great potential :)
I Realllyy like this story! and the two new chapters you have written as like you rewriting it haha yeah, good job! :) ..subscribing,. this has great potential :)
9/1/2011 c14 Don'tWorryBeHappy21
I really liked the story the way it was before, but I also like what you have done so far with the rewrite:)
Pretty please with sugar on top, update soon=DDD
I really liked the story the way it was before, but I also like what you have done so far with the rewrite:)
Pretty please with sugar on top, update soon=DDD
9/1/2011 c14 11SearchingInspiration
Wow the re-write is incredible. it has drawn me in and now I want more!
please updae asap because this has totally drawn me in.
11SearchingInspirationWow the re-write is incredible. it has drawn me in and now I want more!
please updae asap because this has totally drawn me in.
8/31/2011 c13 MirrorFlower and DarkWind
oh wow i like this rewirte really draggs you in especially the last line
oh wow i like this rewirte really draggs you in especially the last line
6/26/2011 c11 Maya
I think jace and clary's first kiss should be in the next chapter because I'm pretty sure it hasn't happened yet
So there is an idea you can have a whole scene with jace and clary emotion spilling
Hope you update soon
Good luck
I think jace and clary's first kiss should be in the next chapter because I'm pretty sure it hasn't happened yet
So there is an idea you can have a whole scene with jace and clary emotion spilling
Hope you update soon
Good luck