7/6/2010 c3 Forever New Yorker
...I kinda wanna see Ichigo get beaten by Kenny...

Lolz, nice Chappy. Dont worry, I have trouble with the action scenes too.

I like the whole "will you do me?" "Sure, Ichigo but that's not what I meant" thing, funny.

And when Ikkaku tells Yachiru that she's too young to know what they're talking about. Funny stuff.

Forever New Yorker

7/6/2010 c1 Forever New Yorker
Kenny wanted them to come to dinner? I like where this is going, and I love Yachiru's nicknames. She is hilarious!

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6/21/2010 c7 Kittycamo
wow uryu and isane are not as innocent as they look

6/21/2010 c5 Kittycamo
great

6/21/2010 c3 Kittycamo
yeah u could have done a better job on the battle.

6/21/2010 c1 Kittycamo
this chapter was good

6/18/2010 c3 Godschildtweety
Love it