for Mad8/27/2013 c1 Guest
The last part was Peverted but the rest was GREAT
The last part was Peverted but the rest was GREAT
6/11/2013 c1 inuyashafan
U . a chapter.4 this it great
U . a chapter.4 this it great
5/15/2011 c1 Margie Quintana
your really good at this i lvoe neyo toooo! keepp it up!
your really good at this i lvoe neyo toooo! keepp it up!
10/25/2010 c1 kinara103
awwwww! i love it! you know what?your an awsome writer...and maybe...you could add a ch 2 (lemons) ...just an idea, ja ne!
awwwww! i love it! you know what?your an awsome writer...and maybe...you could add a ch 2 (lemons) ...just an idea, ja ne!
10/19/2010 c1 
4suckerforromance234
Oh my gosh! so cute! i loved it! the idea of the fight and the make up was a great idea. sometimes when idea comes to you just have to write it down. great job and i loved the last lines. "This was gonna be a long night" "Very long" that was awsome!
4suckerforromance234Oh my gosh! so cute! i loved it! the idea of the fight and the make up was a great idea. sometimes when idea comes to you just have to write it down. great job and i loved the last lines. "This was gonna be a long night" "Very long" that was awsome!