for Hello9/22/2013 c1 dowlingnana
OMG...talk about a heart wrenching story. Yes, I bawled and then anger, a bit, coz' oh he definitely should have told her everything. Sounds as if T. was a bit obsessed for sure.
OMG...talk about a heart wrenching story. Yes, I bawled and then anger, a bit, coz' oh he definitely should have told her everything. Sounds as if T. was a bit obsessed for sure.
8/23/2013 c1 
1Holidai
I am glad they are together. I hope Tanya rots on Earth, perhaps she will be brought up on charges of causing Edward's death, lol. No matter, I adored the ending, it was perfect!
1HolidaiI am glad they are together. I hope Tanya rots on Earth, perhaps she will be brought up on charges of causing Edward's death, lol. No matter, I adored the ending, it was perfect!
6/4/2013 c1 Guest
I don't think I have cried so many tears in my life. ..lol...awesome story
I don't think I have cried so many tears in my life. ..lol...awesome story
6/4/2013 c1 Bee's Bookshelf
Amazing, emotional fic written so beautifully to describe the pain of betrayal (even imagined) a lot of us have felt.
Thank you for sharing with us.
Amazing, emotional fic written so beautifully to describe the pain of betrayal (even imagined) a lot of us have felt.
Thank you for sharing with us.
5/25/2013 c1 Edmazing
Oh gah. I saw someone looking for this in a group and even though this isn't my normal type of read at all, once I saw your name I had to read it.
It's so full of emotion. That crushing, blinding, all consuming need that even after they've found a level of happiness I'm still shaken.
Thank you for exploring this and taking us along with you. You have power in your words.
Ps. I guess I'd read and reviewed this before, but blocked out the pain so I'm reviewing anon because it hit me all over again.
xoxo
Mel
Oh gah. I saw someone looking for this in a group and even though this isn't my normal type of read at all, once I saw your name I had to read it.
It's so full of emotion. That crushing, blinding, all consuming need that even after they've found a level of happiness I'm still shaken.
Thank you for exploring this and taking us along with you. You have power in your words.
Ps. I guess I'd read and reviewed this before, but blocked out the pain so I'm reviewing anon because it hit me all over again.
xoxo
Mel
5/24/2013 c1 Crystalena
Beautiful! I really loved how Edward expressed his feelings to her; it was so deep, so beautiful, so intense... so canon Edward... Thank you for writing and sharing this... Some people might say that this O/S fic is too angsty, but it's a beautiful HEA to me!
Beautiful! I really loved how Edward expressed his feelings to her; it was so deep, so beautiful, so intense... so canon Edward... Thank you for writing and sharing this... Some people might say that this O/S fic is too angsty, but it's a beautiful HEA to me!
8/6/2012 c1 Edmazing
Omg. I'm a sloppy crying mess. I don't even know where to start with how much that believed betrayal hurt.
Oh, and witnessing Edward's pain, having it filtered through Bella's regret supercharged the experience.
Then in came the hope and the fantasy. And I think I'll be able to smile again. As soon as I get rid of this lump and stuffy nose. lol
Thank you for sharing.
xoxo
Mel
Omg. I'm a sloppy crying mess. I don't even know where to start with how much that believed betrayal hurt.
Oh, and witnessing Edward's pain, having it filtered through Bella's regret supercharged the experience.
Then in came the hope and the fantasy. And I think I'll be able to smile again. As soon as I get rid of this lump and stuffy nose. lol
Thank you for sharing.
xoxo
Mel