for Hello4/5/2012 c1 featherme
I love me some emo music. That song is haunting and beautiful, as is this story. Loved it. So now I'm curious, you wrote this a while ago, did this particular video in your mind stop playing?
Thanks for writing! I must read the rest of your work because the ones I have read are amazing.
I love me some emo music. That song is haunting and beautiful, as is this story. Loved it. So now I'm curious, you wrote this a while ago, did this particular video in your mind stop playing?
Thanks for writing! I must read the rest of your work because the ones I have read are amazing.
3/20/2012 c1 
4AnakinPadmeSkywalker
That was heartwrenching. And damn that Tanya. I don't worry about your mental health :-) I thought that was good, if a little emotional.
4AnakinPadmeSkywalkerThat was heartwrenching. And damn that Tanya. I don't worry about your mental health :-) I thought that was good, if a little emotional.
3/19/2012 c1 Byrd3-13
This is one of my favorite one-shots because of the awesome ending. Keep up the good work. :D
This is one of my favorite one-shots because of the awesome ending. Keep up the good work. :D
1/20/2012 c1 Zhee
The ending is amazing! They are together so... though it's scary, it's amazing nonetheless! :)
The ending is amazing! They are together so... though it's scary, it's amazing nonetheless! :)
1/2/2012 c1 ishouldbestudying
I don't know if it's just the hormones, or the depressing music I'm listening to right now, but I literally just sobbed through your story. And this is the 4th time I've read it.
I don't know if it's just the hormones, or the depressing music I'm listening to right now, but I literally just sobbed through your story. And this is the 4th time I've read it.
8/17/2011 c1 Rosie
This story makes me cry like a child every time I read it.
This story makes me cry like a child every time I read it.
4/14/2011 c1 Dantelover051386
Ummm...huh...the only approprate response that i can think if is...HOLYFUCKINGSHIT! that was so sad and intense. part of me just wants to slap the ever living shit out of bella for taking her life. i know how it looked. the calls, tayna the whore talking that way to her husband. edward should of told bella what was going on, but he was trying to protect her and i understand that. and i know how the pictures looked. but seriously bella knew of there love, there bond and despite how it looked she should have believed his word over that skanks. but we all know bella and how emo she can be. over thinking to the point of ocd and making rash decisions before knowing the truth. thats bella for ya. but it was so sweet how they died together. in many ways edward and bella are our modern day romeo and juliet, but i love the tales that leave out sucicide to be honest. i wonder how he died. that would be a interresting follow up for this flick and to see there families reactions and what happened to the skank. i mean seriously with all edwards complaints and charges against her work harassment and i'm sure those pictures were sent by her and have her prints. i mean could they get her on manslaughter or some fuckery like that. i mean yea, bella killed herself, but what tayna's actions lead to bellas emo status then her death. taynas actions in the end caused, led to bellas death. so there muct be a fucking law for that shit or something. hell if i was edward i would killed the bitch first. i seriously doubt i could have restrained myself. i would see it as her fault that my wife was dead beacause of her actions. i am really wondering how he died though. sudden stroke or more than likely a broken heart...literally.
that being said, it is easy to pass judgement on one that takes there life or attempts. i know. with great shame i admit i am one that attempted to take my own life and in the same manor as bella. i survived though for a long time i wish i hadnt. see mine wasnt the loss of my sould mate though i did in the end lose the love of my life. my son died and when he died i wanted to die to. i still do sometimes. some days are better than others, but i have to believe that one day that i will see him again. then again if i was catholic then i am shit up the fucking creek without a paddle. since i attempted to end my life i will burn in hell for eternity. in the end i deserve that fate and accept it. though i will admit it sucks. anyways i guess what i am trying to say is that for one to truly understand what one is thinking when contemplating sucicide you have to be the one going though it personally. one can easily judge. call you weak and selfish. that may very well be. you are being weak and selfish to a point, but you have to see the unbelievable pain that you have that is causing you to take such drastic measures. no one can truly understand that unless theyve been there and done that. i also see edwards pain here. my love was so angry at me. so furious at me for almost taking my life. even called me cold and selfish. cruel that i wasnt thinking of him and only myself. true. in many ways i was thinking of my pain, but i was also grieving tremendously for a son that i would not have. the pain was all to consuning. to overwhelming that the only way i saw to relieve it was to end...me. i see and understand both sides of the spectrum here. truly. in edward and bellas case here her love stood by her even died with her. my love, though i do not doubt the love my love had for me. it was epic and the truest of trues, but there was just to much pain in the past for my love to remain. some might say that since my love left 'willingly' that proves my love wasnt really my love. no. my love was my soul mate and if i lived a thousand life times i would fall in love with my love every single time. its just i guess that in this life the pain tore us apart.thats my fault and i will NEVER forgive myself for that and the pain that i was caused my love. so if i burn in hell for eternity for that...then im ok with that.
Ahem, on a brighter note, if i do end up in hell, i'll finially have that fuck awesome tan ive wanted my entire life. ;)
Ummm...huh...the only approprate response that i can think if is...HOLYFUCKINGSHIT! that was so sad and intense. part of me just wants to slap the ever living shit out of bella for taking her life. i know how it looked. the calls, tayna the whore talking that way to her husband. edward should of told bella what was going on, but he was trying to protect her and i understand that. and i know how the pictures looked. but seriously bella knew of there love, there bond and despite how it looked she should have believed his word over that skanks. but we all know bella and how emo she can be. over thinking to the point of ocd and making rash decisions before knowing the truth. thats bella for ya. but it was so sweet how they died together. in many ways edward and bella are our modern day romeo and juliet, but i love the tales that leave out sucicide to be honest. i wonder how he died. that would be a interresting follow up for this flick and to see there families reactions and what happened to the skank. i mean seriously with all edwards complaints and charges against her work harassment and i'm sure those pictures were sent by her and have her prints. i mean could they get her on manslaughter or some fuckery like that. i mean yea, bella killed herself, but what tayna's actions lead to bellas emo status then her death. taynas actions in the end caused, led to bellas death. so there muct be a fucking law for that shit or something. hell if i was edward i would killed the bitch first. i seriously doubt i could have restrained myself. i would see it as her fault that my wife was dead beacause of her actions. i am really wondering how he died though. sudden stroke or more than likely a broken heart...literally.
that being said, it is easy to pass judgement on one that takes there life or attempts. i know. with great shame i admit i am one that attempted to take my own life and in the same manor as bella. i survived though for a long time i wish i hadnt. see mine wasnt the loss of my sould mate though i did in the end lose the love of my life. my son died and when he died i wanted to die to. i still do sometimes. some days are better than others, but i have to believe that one day that i will see him again. then again if i was catholic then i am shit up the fucking creek without a paddle. since i attempted to end my life i will burn in hell for eternity. in the end i deserve that fate and accept it. though i will admit it sucks. anyways i guess what i am trying to say is that for one to truly understand what one is thinking when contemplating sucicide you have to be the one going though it personally. one can easily judge. call you weak and selfish. that may very well be. you are being weak and selfish to a point, but you have to see the unbelievable pain that you have that is causing you to take such drastic measures. no one can truly understand that unless theyve been there and done that. i also see edwards pain here. my love was so angry at me. so furious at me for almost taking my life. even called me cold and selfish. cruel that i wasnt thinking of him and only myself. true. in many ways i was thinking of my pain, but i was also grieving tremendously for a son that i would not have. the pain was all to consuning. to overwhelming that the only way i saw to relieve it was to end...me. i see and understand both sides of the spectrum here. truly. in edward and bellas case here her love stood by her even died with her. my love, though i do not doubt the love my love had for me. it was epic and the truest of trues, but there was just to much pain in the past for my love to remain. some might say that since my love left 'willingly' that proves my love wasnt really my love. no. my love was my soul mate and if i lived a thousand life times i would fall in love with my love every single time. its just i guess that in this life the pain tore us apart.thats my fault and i will NEVER forgive myself for that and the pain that i was caused my love. so if i burn in hell for eternity for that...then im ok with that.
Ahem, on a brighter note, if i do end up in hell, i'll finially have that fuck awesome tan ive wanted my entire life. ;)
4/10/2011 c1 Sally70
Beautifully written.
So sad, but they do belong together x
Beautifully written.
So sad, but they do belong together x
4/3/2011 c1 Danie Carly Cullen
*Tears*
I've never hated Tanya so much.
Brilliant story so well written.
*Tears*
I've never hated Tanya so much.
Brilliant story so well written.
1/15/2011 c1 peace
i really like how everything, went in a order here. but what happen here. is this after Breaking Dawn, or is this way after BD happen, when he was human.
i really like how everything, went in a order here. but what happen here. is this after Breaking Dawn, or is this way after BD happen, when he was human.