10/7/2012 c1 Guest
love it. love it. love it. squeals. so sweet. so perfect. the best. Although I do wonder. You showed what sensei was thinking about Cam and Hunter. Could you show Blakes thoughts about watching Hunter and Cam? I know you showed Blakes physical reactions, but could you show what he is thinking?
love it. love it. love it. squeals. so sweet. so perfect. the best. Although I do wonder. You showed what sensei was thinking about Cam and Hunter. Could you show Blakes thoughts about watching Hunter and Cam? I know you showed Blakes physical reactions, but could you show what he is thinking?
6/24/2010 c1 7o-o-o-VampirianWolfGirl-o-o-o
you, sir, are a genious! i LOVED this story! it was soo enjoyable to read! ur expression, grammer, punctuation, description and dialogue were PERFECT! the fight between hunter and cam and then the way they made up at the end was beautiful! such a unique way of saying i love u and sorry and it suits them soo well! I was worried that the song wuld make it too cliche or girly but it DIDNT! u wrote in a way that was just amazing and soo realistic! im a HUGE fan of this couple but soo many people dont write them well, u on the other hand have done an AMAZING job! and u've only written 3 stories? say what? plse write more wen ur muse bugs u! and thanks for this story! u shuld be soo proud of it! :)
you, sir, are a genious! i LOVED this story! it was soo enjoyable to read! ur expression, grammer, punctuation, description and dialogue were PERFECT! the fight between hunter and cam and then the way they made up at the end was beautiful! such a unique way of saying i love u and sorry and it suits them soo well! I was worried that the song wuld make it too cliche or girly but it DIDNT! u wrote in a way that was just amazing and soo realistic! im a HUGE fan of this couple but soo many people dont write them well, u on the other hand have done an AMAZING job! and u've only written 3 stories? say what? plse write more wen ur muse bugs u! and thanks for this story! u shuld be soo proud of it! :)
5/18/2010 c1 3BJvision
This was so emotional. There are only a few fics I have seen where Cam just lets it all out on Hunter for his carelessness for himself and others at time. At least this allowed them to admit everything clearly.
This was so emotional. There are only a few fics I have seen where Cam just lets it all out on Hunter for his carelessness for himself and others at time. At least this allowed them to admit everything clearly.
5/17/2010 c1 20JasonLeeScottFan
That was awesome! I loved how you told it from Kanoi's point of view! And I love this couple! But what mission was HUnter coming back from? Great job!
That was awesome! I loved how you told it from Kanoi's point of view! And I love this couple! But what mission was HUnter coming back from? Great job!