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3/30/2018 c3 amber168
Update soon
4/5/2013 c3 Guest
HATE IT!
8/4/2010 c3 14Bang Rowdyruff
Im a little confused...so, when they returned to the past, Sissi didnt forget anything?
8/4/2010 c3 1UlrichxYumiFan
Love the story already! I would like longer chaps thought ;) Great first fanfic!
8/4/2010 c3 1Lord Mephisto
That ending was EPIC LOL.

I must see how this turns out.

Again too shor for me, but hey yer the one writing this thing.

I didn't catch any grammical errors, good job with that.

This chapter will help the readers( me!) understand the plot better I think. Good job my friend. I look forward to reading chapter 4.

Later,

Mephisto.
8/3/2010 c3 9Hinacrush
Nice it's pretty good for your first fanfic that you wrote!Can't wait for you to update hope it's alittle longer but good.If you have time read my story Don't Tell Anyone of Ulrich and Yumi and tell me what you think so review.
6/26/2010 c2 1Lord Mephisto
again, too short for my liking, but still good my advice would be to take chapter one and two and make them into one long chapter.

it seems like it will be a good story when it's finished.

later,

Lord mephisto
6/26/2010 c1 Lord Mephisto
not a bad first chapter, a bit too short for me, but its not that bad.

also you need to add a bit of depth to the story, like telling us how sissy found out about lyoko, or why she and ulrich are dating.

hope this helps you future writings, and welcome to fanfiction.net.

If ya got any questions, feel free to message me.

later,

Lord Mephisto
6/23/2010 c1 7Shannon Waters
carry onnn!
5/23/2010 c1 3Silverwing2008
OMG PLZ CONTINUE I AM LIKE DIEING OVER HERE. CONTINUE NAO

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5/20/2010 c1 whatapapa
Hey, you wrote this pretty well for your first fic. Oh yeah, and if you have time check out my story. It's a season 5 of code lyoko

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