for All the kings sons: Men of Valor6/3/2010 c4 
10chibiangel413
Poor Malcom and Mina, they seemed so cute together. What happened to cause the break-up? And who is shooting arrows at them now?
10chibiangel413Poor Malcom and Mina, they seemed so cute together. What happened to cause the break-up? And who is shooting arrows at them now?
5/24/2010 c4 MoonPrincessNece
omg i luv this story. plz u have 2 post more as soon as u can. i have 2 know what happens with everyone ^_^
omg i luv this story. plz u have 2 post more as soon as u can. i have 2 know what happens with everyone ^_^
5/20/2010 c4 Light'by'day
***I must say that I thoroughly enjoy this story! ^^ I really like the dialouge and banter of the characters and I can't wait to read more!
***I must say that I thoroughly enjoy this story! ^^ I really like the dialouge and banter of the characters and I can't wait to read more!
5/20/2010 c4 16EvaC
Another great chapter liked how you brought some of the girls into this. Looking forward to more with Darien and Serena and loved Mina and Malcolm together.
16EvaCAnother great chapter liked how you brought some of the girls into this. Looking forward to more with Darien and Serena and loved Mina and Malcolm together.
5/20/2010 c4 hehe
I am loving this story! I hope there is a good Serena/Darien parts coming up.
I am loving this story! I hope there is a good Serena/Darien parts coming up.
5/19/2010 c3 10chibiangel413
Interesting start, I can't wait to see where the story goes, and how you develop the characters.
10chibiangel413Interesting start, I can't wait to see where the story goes, and how you develop the characters.