
3/31 c18 PuddingExpert
I know this hasn't been updated in over ten years, but if you ever feel like coming back, please do. This is so well written and interesting and it is SO difficult to find good Bones fics, let alone ones with a Zack focused romance. I love the build up, Shilloh is adorable and cool, and her relationships and interactions with everyone are so fun to read. Thank you for sharing your writing 3
I know this hasn't been updated in over ten years, but if you ever feel like coming back, please do. This is so well written and interesting and it is SO difficult to find good Bones fics, let alone ones with a Zack focused romance. I love the build up, Shilloh is adorable and cool, and her relationships and interactions with everyone are so fun to read. Thank you for sharing your writing 3
3/11/2019 c18 E
Mwah! Darling I love it xx
Mwah! Darling I love it xx
1/19/2017 c18 Guest
This is great but plaese UPDATE
This is great but plaese UPDATE
7/20/2015 c18 TeamFreeWill2
I know you haven't updated in a really really really long time but I just wanted to let you know that I really love your story. It is absolutely amazing and wish that it continued. Really an amazing job
I know you haven't updated in a really really really long time but I just wanted to let you know that I really love your story. It is absolutely amazing and wish that it continued. Really an amazing job
6/1/2014 c18 Stabbythings
I guess this story has been ditched? I wish it hadn't I think it's pretty awesome but since 2011 was the last time it was updated it isn't going anywhere. Oh well it was nice while it lasted, great story I hope you do update one day though.
I guess this story has been ditched? I wish it hadn't I think it's pretty awesome but since 2011 was the last time it was updated it isn't going anywhere. Oh well it was nice while it lasted, great story I hope you do update one day though.
1/5/2014 c18
3stephcullen2000
I love it so please update again soon and maybe you could read one of my stories x

I love it so please update again soon and maybe you could read one of my stories x
12/28/2013 c18
1AngelsLikeBurgers
Alas, another seemingly abandoned ZackOC story. You didnt even get to the relationship part! Unfortunate, because most of the stories capture Zack so well, this one especially. Ah well, I suppose it's because of season 3, most people aren't motivated to write Zack anymore. Anyways, good story! Sucks you decided not to update anymore, especially since it seemed you were hinting at something actually happening in the next chapter.

Alas, another seemingly abandoned ZackOC story. You didnt even get to the relationship part! Unfortunate, because most of the stories capture Zack so well, this one especially. Ah well, I suppose it's because of season 3, most people aren't motivated to write Zack anymore. Anyways, good story! Sucks you decided not to update anymore, especially since it seemed you were hinting at something actually happening in the next chapter.
7/7/2012 c18 Guest
Hey keep it up zack is Sokol zack an love it all
Hey keep it up zack is Sokol zack an love it all
1/8/2012 c18 AlexHide
Please tell me there will be an update and that You haven't abandoned this story! Please! Just tell me! I'd try to annoy You with reviews, but it appears that only one is allowed per chapter, so... If it's not too much to ask, could You please let me know? (Side note: I'm all up for You to continue! It's a great story and I can't wait for an update!) Good luck and have a nice morning/day/evening/night after(or even if) You read this... :D
Please tell me there will be an update and that You haven't abandoned this story! Please! Just tell me! I'd try to annoy You with reviews, but it appears that only one is allowed per chapter, so... If it's not too much to ask, could You please let me know? (Side note: I'm all up for You to continue! It's a great story and I can't wait for an update!) Good luck and have a nice morning/day/evening/night after(or even if) You read this... :D
11/13/2011 c18 Guest
In place of Zack being Gormogon's apprentice (which I'd totally laughable) you could have him be injured an them dealing with that? I'd always wondered what would happen if Brennan did make good on her promise to make sure he kept his job. Also, I love your story and eagerly await the next chapter!
In place of Zack being Gormogon's apprentice (which I'd totally laughable) you could have him be injured an them dealing with that? I'd always wondered what would happen if Brennan did make good on her promise to make sure he kept his job. Also, I love your story and eagerly await the next chapter!
11/13/2011 c18 Anon
It's nearly midnight, I have work at six in the morning, and I should be well and truly asleep by now. But you know what? I'm not. Why?
Because I am in LOVE.
With your Zach, with Shilloh (God that girl is adorable!), with your characterisation of the entire team. I adore how they interact, and you've even got Zach (who is EXTREMELY difficult) perfectly down-pat. I sing your praises and give you a thousand accolades for that.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of fanfiction. Long live Zach Addy!
It's nearly midnight, I have work at six in the morning, and I should be well and truly asleep by now. But you know what? I'm not. Why?
Because I am in LOVE.
With your Zach, with Shilloh (God that girl is adorable!), with your characterisation of the entire team. I adore how they interact, and you've even got Zach (who is EXTREMELY difficult) perfectly down-pat. I sing your praises and give you a thousand accolades for that.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of fanfiction. Long live Zach Addy!
10/14/2011 c15 Black-Star98
Please, please, PLEASE don't make Zach Gormogon's apprentice! He didn't even kill the lobbyist, he only told Gormogon where to find him. So if you're going to do the season finale please make it someone else. Like Bob or maybe even Cheryl, I'm sorry it's just I miss him that's all...
Great story btw! :)
Please, please, PLEASE don't make Zach Gormogon's apprentice! He didn't even kill the lobbyist, he only told Gormogon where to find him. So if you're going to do the season finale please make it someone else. Like Bob or maybe even Cheryl, I'm sorry it's just I miss him that's all...
Great story btw! :)
10/8/2011 c18
1AvidReaderWolf
I just read all of these chapters in the past few hours and have loved it! I think your writing is fantastic and just love Shilloh. Not many people can pull of OCs well when writing a fanfic, but you have done so marvelously! Can't wait to read more :)

I just read all of these chapters in the past few hours and have loved it! I think your writing is fantastic and just love Shilloh. Not many people can pull of OCs well when writing a fanfic, but you have done so marvelously! Can't wait to read more :)