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11/1/2010 c1 PrideIsArrogance
You read my story and reviewed, so here I am reviewing yours! :) Lovely. I found the rhyme scheme made this poem all the more appealing, and repetition set a very nice tone. The only thing I noticed was the word, "Happily." It was spelled, "Haply." That was a little odd to read, but I'm sure it was just a typo. Anyways, good job. You should definitely write more poems! You write them very well! :D
8/17/2010 c1 2JustEmily
woah you wrote this? i had no clue you could write this well! 3 love you
6/6/2010 c1 169Sithstrukk
Very nice. I'm not always one for love poems, but you did good here!
5/26/2010 c1 1LadyPadmeMoon
Very good poem. I really enjoyed it
5/21/2010 c1 12389011471
Aww, this was beautiful! Lovely job! :)

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