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11/6/2018 c21 wolf-in-hell
Awesome. I like the bit with vernon's and Dudly's gifts.
5/1/2012 c12 3Almech Alfarion

Ranma/Nabiki pairing with Hermione as their daughter? Now that would be an interesting read... I keep imagining year-1 Halloween where the Troll gets in and the teachers show up at the bathroom only to be gobsmacked when they see that she has the thing in a headlock...

Silliness aside however, There are a whole slew of things you could explore to flesh this story out a bit more. Things like How the heck Nabiki, and even more-so Ranma of all people, became *dentists* of all things come to the top of my mind, but then there are the questions like "Why did they leave Japan?", "What happened with the NWC that was even more destructive than usual to make it so they can't go back? Or did it have something to do with the Tendo family specifically?" and "When is McGonagall going to figure out that Hermione doesn't actually weigh 300lbs, but that she's wearing over twice her body-weight in training weights...

Things I would adjust if I were to write a story like this myself would be to bump Hermione's birthday back to where she would be in the same year as Harry (She's already almost a year older than him in cannon already anyway) and I'd probably move her back to Gryffindor. She may have an insanely frightening intelligence thanks to both of her parents, but if she's anything like her father in his own youth then she would probably charge into dangerous situations to help people regardless of the dangers, and when has Nabiki ever let the odds stop her? Though that might actually qualify her more for Slytherin now that I think about it...

Eh, details. 8-P
5/1/2012 c13 Almech Alfarion
An interesting concept. I've only read one other fem-harry story so far (and that was just a straight HP story. No x-overs), but the concept of "Harry" being an obliviated Makoto is interesting enough when you take the butterfly effect into account. Other than that, I can't see this as being a very long story when you think about it... Between Setsuna likely being able to use the Time Gates to find Voldemort's Horcrux' and Usagi possibly being able to "purify" them (If not out-rite obliterate him, circumventing the need to locate his soul-fragments entirely) as well as the firepower any one of the Senshi can bring to bear on the Death-eaters, it would be a very short war... On the other hand, Voldemort's now had two + years to consolidate his power-base in wizarding Brittan without "The Girl Who Lived" to act as a rallying point for the resistance (and in all likelihood having assumed that she's dead when no-one could find her), the possibility of Harriet returning to a very changed European wizarding world is very likely...

If I were to write a story along this vein, I think it would explore character development such as Harriet adjusting to the changes from what she remembers and her old friends adjusting/reconciling to her new identity, rather than focusing entirely on the effort to end Moldy-shorts once and for all...
4/30/2012 c13 1Bobboky
4/30/2012 c12 Bobboky
very nice work
4/30/2012 c11 Bobboky
awesome work
4/28/2012 c13 4korrd
I'd love to see this fleshed out into a full fic. I've seen plenty of Ranma as a senshi, and even one or two Naruto as a senshi, but the closest I've seen for it with Harry is one where he falls into pool of drowned Usagi and eventually replaces Mamoru as Usagi's love interest. But this one is really interesting so I hope you'll continue it.
4/27/2012 c9 Godofbicsuit
I have no idea where this would go, but it is pretty epic looking. The language sets the mood perfectly.
12/19/2011 c6 1Magic Kirby
Yeah I would have to say Peggy Sue fics are my favorite, too bad there really isn't very many for Bleach like there are for the bigger fandoms like Harry Potter and Naruto. Anyways a good oneshot!
9/28/2011 c10 3Bad Habits
Actually all those hollows he kills? They all have names. Every last one.
7/14/2011 c8 Bad Habits


Gasai Yuno? Really? Isn't she the poster child for "If I can't have you no-one can?" known for killing her parents and everyone even remotely close to her "boyfriend?"
2/2/2011 c4 1Bobboky
2/1/2011 c4 2god of stuff
I like it. Granted Naruto would be insanely overpowered in the FnZ world with what you've given him but so was Shirou in the hill of swords. This could quite easily become very enjoyable. I would love to see more of it.
1/19/2011 c3 1Bobboky
5/27/2010 c1 1uchiha miyo
Hey this is good, and personally, Sakura is one of my fav's. And your storie is really good, better then some of the ones i've been trying to read. so yea, just wanted to wish you luck on the upcoming ones. So, can't wait.
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