for Fill My Little World5/21/2010 c1 mercurio1217
Congrats on posting your first chapter- really cute story so far! I cant wait to read more.
Congrats on posting your first chapter- really cute story so far! I cant wait to read more.
5/21/2010 c1 
2kymclark
Hello! I just saw you tweet this, I've following u (on twitter, not in RL-haha) and I've seen you are a big fic fan, so I had to read your story.
I love the introduction, I love the fact you've set this in England (what you know) and I find that refreshing :)
I love Jasper, Rose and the supporting cast. I especially love the spontaneous intro to Sleeping Beauty :).
I love that Bella is a horse rider too. I've always loved that Equestrian world, living in America, it seems so romantic to me!
Great job, can't wait for more!
2kymclarkHello! I just saw you tweet this, I've following u (on twitter, not in RL-haha) and I've seen you are a big fic fan, so I had to read your story.
I love the introduction, I love the fact you've set this in England (what you know) and I find that refreshing :)
I love Jasper, Rose and the supporting cast. I especially love the spontaneous intro to Sleeping Beauty :).
I love that Bella is a horse rider too. I've always loved that Equestrian world, living in America, it seems so romantic to me!
Great job, can't wait for more!
5/21/2010 c1 Onward
Yippee Skippee~~ You posted and it's wonderful. I am loving this intro and intriuge to your story.
Who is this Edward? And where did he come from? Will he be staying around?
Lots of juicy question will leave me looking for more answer and anxiously awaiting your next update...
Way to go bb!
Kellie
xoxo
Yippee Skippee~~ You posted and it's wonderful. I am loving this intro and intriuge to your story.
Who is this Edward? And where did he come from? Will he be staying around?
Lots of juicy question will leave me looking for more answer and anxiously awaiting your next update...
Way to go bb!
Kellie
xoxo
5/21/2010 c1 2RandomCran
Yeah to quietruby for tweeting about this!
Congratulations on your first fic!
I like how you have set up and developed your Bella. She is perfectly awkward and lives a hermit like existence. I can relate to her shyness when it comes to avoiding people. It is something I have fought and fought to overcome and I think you have captured that aspect of her personality perfectly.
I enjoyed the glimpses of Japser and Rosalie and look forward to getting to know them better. They are good friends to Bella and I'll be interested to see what their sibling relationship is like.
And then there is our Sleeping Beauty. I have no doubt I would stub my toe (or perhaps blow out my knee and faint) at that sight on an office sofa. I love that Edward found Bella interesting enough to have Jasper make a formal introduction. I think it shows he understands her personality somewhat right from the get go.
Poor Bella, looking for escape from her "terrible" day by enjoying her horses only come back and find Edward waiting for her before she has a chance to clean herself up. Looking forward to seeing what happens next...
I'm adding this to my list of faves.
Great Start!
Jenn
2RandomCranYeah to quietruby for tweeting about this!
Congratulations on your first fic!
I like how you have set up and developed your Bella. She is perfectly awkward and lives a hermit like existence. I can relate to her shyness when it comes to avoiding people. It is something I have fought and fought to overcome and I think you have captured that aspect of her personality perfectly.
I enjoyed the glimpses of Japser and Rosalie and look forward to getting to know them better. They are good friends to Bella and I'll be interested to see what their sibling relationship is like.
And then there is our Sleeping Beauty. I have no doubt I would stub my toe (or perhaps blow out my knee and faint) at that sight on an office sofa. I love that Edward found Bella interesting enough to have Jasper make a formal introduction. I think it shows he understands her personality somewhat right from the get go.
Poor Bella, looking for escape from her "terrible" day by enjoying her horses only come back and find Edward waiting for her before she has a chance to clean herself up. Looking forward to seeing what happens next...
I'm adding this to my list of faves.
Great Start!
Jenn
5/21/2010 c1 PBJilly
HKP, that was a lovely opening chapter. When I saw that your Bella owned horses, I immediately thought of that other horse lover, Katmom! You introduced us to the characters, but didn't tell us much and I really liked that because I don't know where you will be taking us. Obviously, Bella has had some heartbreak in her past(liked the HP ref there!) and is now protecting herself. I always try to guess how Edward will be showing up (boss? brother?) but sleeping on an office couch was not what I expected. Good work! I didn't understand all your Brit English words but most of them I got.
HKP, that was a lovely opening chapter. When I saw that your Bella owned horses, I immediately thought of that other horse lover, Katmom! You introduced us to the characters, but didn't tell us much and I really liked that because I don't know where you will be taking us. Obviously, Bella has had some heartbreak in her past(liked the HP ref there!) and is now protecting herself. I always try to guess how Edward will be showing up (boss? brother?) but sleeping on an office couch was not what I expected. Good work! I didn't understand all your Brit English words but most of them I got.
5/21/2010 c1 1quietruby
YOU DID IT!
what a fun chapter! fluid, exciting and of course EDWARD! nice! poor bella all red-faced and swoony and she has no idea what just hit her.
Love the set up, premise and am looking forward to more! congrats at leaping! :)
1quietrubyYOU DID IT!
what a fun chapter! fluid, exciting and of course EDWARD! nice! poor bella all red-faced and swoony and she has no idea what just hit her.
Love the set up, premise and am looking forward to more! congrats at leaping! :)
5/21/2010 c1 1sscana
Yeah! You did it and I loved it. Love the JLo reference. Poor bella doesn't know how hot she is. I love the discrition of Jasper and Edward. They're hot. I'm really liking jazz in your story. Like how Bella say he's not her type. Love the horses name it's perfect! Can not wait for next week. Have a feeling Jasper and Edward might tease poor Bella. Your storys adorable bb.
1sscanaYeah! You did it and I loved it. Love the JLo reference. Poor bella doesn't know how hot she is. I love the discrition of Jasper and Edward. They're hot. I'm really liking jazz in your story. Like how Bella say he's not her type. Love the horses name it's perfect! Can not wait for next week. Have a feeling Jasper and Edward might tease poor Bella. Your storys adorable bb.
5/21/2010 c1 4cosmoandmarvar
This was just F*cking awesome! Really. Good for you for finally doing it. I love British Bella! All awkward and nervous. I know NOTHING about an awkward Bella.
I like the stage you have set and I am looking forward to reading more about these characters.
Thank you!
xoxo,
cosmo
4cosmoandmarvarThis was just F*cking awesome! Really. Good for you for finally doing it. I love British Bella! All awkward and nervous. I know NOTHING about an awkward Bella.
I like the stage you have set and I am looking forward to reading more about these characters.
Thank you!
xoxo,
cosmo
5/21/2010 c1 4afmtoo
i knew you could do it, well done! It's come together very nicely I love the imagery and Bella's internal voice too.
AFMxx
4afmtooi knew you could do it, well done! It's come together very nicely I love the imagery and Bella's internal voice too.
AFMxx
5/21/2010 c1 EMCxo
Congrats sweetie!
Love Edward as sleeping beauty.
Just Fork It aka Freddie! Love it.
Your Bella may be a hermit but I love her humor and slightly snarky personality.
Off to a great start!
Thank you for the thank you. Anytime bb!
xo
Em
Congrats sweetie!
Love Edward as sleeping beauty.
Just Fork It aka Freddie! Love it.
Your Bella may be a hermit but I love her humor and slightly snarky personality.
Off to a great start!
Thank you for the thank you. Anytime bb!
xo
Em