12/31/2020 c28 CamouflagedHalo
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was phenomenal from beginning to end. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was phenomenal from beginning to end. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.
2/25/2018 c28 Aggie94
Enjoyed before... loved it a second time around. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg.
Enjoyed before... loved it a second time around. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg.
2/17/2018 c21 Guest
It's kinda annoying that in Bella's head she thinks she's changed and she's not this meek little girl anymore but really she still is she can't stand up for herself and uses Edward as a crutch. She honestly stayed the same throughout the entire story it sucks to see you write opportunities for her to confront her past bullies but the she doesn't do anything.
It's kinda annoying that in Bella's head she thinks she's changed and she's not this meek little girl anymore but really she still is she can't stand up for herself and uses Edward as a crutch. She honestly stayed the same throughout the entire story it sucks to see you write opportunities for her to confront her past bullies but the she doesn't do anything.
7/3/2016 c28 Kasey Jones
Great story but seriously what is with all the drinking? It sounds like she has a drinking problem with her needing a glass of wine all the time.
Great story but seriously what is with all the drinking? It sounds like she has a drinking problem with her needing a glass of wine all the time.
6/23/2016 c9 eaterofwords
the pace of their r/s is at the speed of light,at least the physical aspect of it, it's nice but the emotional aspect is lacking and it's kinda getting boring honestly
the pace of their r/s is at the speed of light,at least the physical aspect of it, it's nice but the emotional aspect is lacking and it's kinda getting boring honestly
5/8/2016 c11 lmb1
I just found your story and am enjoying every chapter even though I should be working! I am glad Edward is sensitive to Bella's insecurities although I wish she would confide everything to him including her trepidation about Jessica and Lauren. I am looking forward to their date.
I just found your story and am enjoying every chapter even though I should be working! I am glad Edward is sensitive to Bella's insecurities although I wish she would confide everything to him including her trepidation about Jessica and Lauren. I am looking forward to their date.
4/15/2016 c28 7Lizzie Paige
Great little story. I'm glad Bella took the year to follow her dreams, now she at least knows that she gave it her best and it would have given her a chance to come out of her shell a little more without Edward, which I think this Bella truly needed.
I think I'd be rightly put out by Edward producing blueprints to enlarge the cottage without discussing their long term future first. To have had the plans drawn up this is something he's obviously been discussing with others - but not with Bella. I couldn't help but show my disappointment if I were her; that others would know what he was thinking and planning, yet he hadn't mentioned this once - bizarre to me! She has given up her full-time riding future for them to be together and all he's committed to is enlarging the cottage they're in?! Poor form Edward, give the girl a bloody ring man! LOL
Great little story. I'm glad Bella took the year to follow her dreams, now she at least knows that she gave it her best and it would have given her a chance to come out of her shell a little more without Edward, which I think this Bella truly needed.
I think I'd be rightly put out by Edward producing blueprints to enlarge the cottage without discussing their long term future first. To have had the plans drawn up this is something he's obviously been discussing with others - but not with Bella. I couldn't help but show my disappointment if I were her; that others would know what he was thinking and planning, yet he hadn't mentioned this once - bizarre to me! She has given up her full-time riding future for them to be together and all he's committed to is enlarging the cottage they're in?! Poor form Edward, give the girl a bloody ring man! LOL