for New Girl6/11/2010 c1 
11kvsgrl
Very promising start. I like the dialog. It makes them seem real. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Maeguerite
11kvsgrlVery promising start. I like the dialog. It makes them seem real. Please update soon and keep up the great work.
Maeguerite
6/11/2010 c2 kvsgrl
SO far so good. I really like how you make the characters come alive. Keep up the good work.
Marguerite
SO far so good. I really like how you make the characters come alive. Keep up the good work.
Marguerite
6/11/2010 c3 kvsgrl
Awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
5/24/2010 c3 Cityoffire1996
Hmmm. I am interested in seeing where you take this. I hope you update soon.
Hmmm. I am interested in seeing where you take this. I hope you update soon.