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1/10/2014 c1 janie
No ofdence but that may me sad but exelent job u shoild be a poet someday
11/23/2012 c1 3Tribute X
Loved it! It was so emotional... i'm not usually a fan of the AABB rhyming style but I believe you pulled it off quite well. I loved how you made her sound helpless, I really sympathized with her. Then you changed it to a more depressing atmosphere and I was just on the ride, letting my emotions take me to wherever you decided. The ending was just heart-breakingly good. A ! Write more soon!
7/8/2010 c1 15The Shrubbery
I'm thoroughly surprised that no one reviewed before me! This is a beautifully written poem that surely conveys the Tribute's true thoughts. It flows nicely and the rhymes are very...cute? LOL, I'm posting this in my profile.

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