for Blood Adoptions with Saiyans1/1/2012 c1 OcGoddess
Oh please don't tell me your one of those 'Put of a great teaser first chapter and then leave it' authors cause that kills me, lol. It always seems I find awesome stories but then they never get continued. And if you aren't going to continue this might I suggest putting it up for adoption. That way the plot of this wonderful story can continue on and be EPIC!
Oh please don't tell me your one of those 'Put of a great teaser first chapter and then leave it' authors cause that kills me, lol. It always seems I find awesome stories but then they never get continued. And if you aren't going to continue this might I suggest putting it up for adoption. That way the plot of this wonderful story can continue on and be EPIC!
12/29/2010 c1 
4Black Rose of Twilight
Your story has great potential. It could use a little nip-tuck here and there but its great. I hope to see what you can do. Great Job!
4Black Rose of TwilightYour story has great potential. It could use a little nip-tuck here and there but its great. I hope to see what you can do. Great Job!
11/27/2010 c1 Saturnblue
It's rather stupid of the wizard world to do that to their heroes. IF they don't watch out history will repeat itself and this time I hope the heroes will learn to do something about those in power before it gets out of the hand. The wizard world will wish they never did this crime from the beginning. It will be fun to see what genes Harry inhered once he became blood adopted by Vegeta. The Z-warriors will be surprised. This will change the DBZ storyline if you are following it.
Will Trunks or Bra ever be born into this dbz world or not at all. I'm assuming this is after the Freeza saga and before the Cell saga. I hope you will continue to write this story since it seem to be a fun story to read more about. Harry will be a hybrid a new specie.
It's rather stupid of the wizard world to do that to their heroes. IF they don't watch out history will repeat itself and this time I hope the heroes will learn to do something about those in power before it gets out of the hand. The wizard world will wish they never did this crime from the beginning. It will be fun to see what genes Harry inhered once he became blood adopted by Vegeta. The Z-warriors will be surprised. This will change the DBZ storyline if you are following it.
Will Trunks or Bra ever be born into this dbz world or not at all. I'm assuming this is after the Freeza saga and before the Cell saga. I hope you will continue to write this story since it seem to be a fun story to read more about. Harry will be a hybrid a new specie.
9/19/2010 c1 4Shadow of Flame
Interesting. Nice start. I can see Vegeta doing something like that...maybe...if he's really despreate. But he also likes to be the strongest, with the combo of Saiyan strengh and magic, Harry might be stronger. Have to wonder what harry's name will become. Look foward to more.
4Shadow of FlameInteresting. Nice start. I can see Vegeta doing something like that...maybe...if he's really despreate. But he also likes to be the strongest, with the combo of Saiyan strengh and magic, Harry might be stronger. Have to wonder what harry's name will become. Look foward to more.
9/6/2010 c1 aliengirlguy
okay, the concpet is interesting. i hope you update, i am curious to see how this pans out.
okay, the concpet is interesting. i hope you update, i am curious to see how this pans out.
6/21/2010 c1 yukineko19
What happened? Are you going to update anytime soon? That was a really good first chapter:*) Can you please UPDATE!
What happened? Are you going to update anytime soon? That was a really good first chapter:*) Can you please UPDATE!
6/16/2010 c1 5Wolf Dragon Demon
Cool, totally hope you continue. I just hope Harry knows what he's getting into.
5Wolf Dragon DemonCool, totally hope you continue. I just hope Harry knows what he's getting into.
6/11/2010 c1 8Suichi's Water
Why did you have to leave it there? I need to see what hapens next. lawl. Update when you can.
8Suichi's WaterWhy did you have to leave it there? I need to see what hapens next. lawl. Update when you can.