for Night Must Fall1/14 c19 Guest
OMG! Love it
OMG! Love it
1/14 c18 Guest
Alice and Bella’s reconciliation was anticlimactic to say the least. But it was expected, with all the heart break and trauma.
Hard to believe so many people were killed because they were thought to be witches.
Alice and Bella’s reconciliation was anticlimactic to say the least. But it was expected, with all the heart break and trauma.
Hard to believe so many people were killed because they were thought to be witches.
1/14 c16 Guest
Great chap! The detail you put into this story is amazing. And their bond... I don’t know why but I’ve always admired the tender way Edward loves Bella. Him being a red eyed Volturi guard and still loving her the same way feels even better.
Great chap! The detail you put into this story is amazing. And their bond... I don’t know why but I’ve always admired the tender way Edward loves Bella. Him being a red eyed Volturi guard and still loving her the same way feels even better.
1/14 c14 Guest
The slow build up from the start is amazing to read! Great chap
The slow build up from the start is amazing to read! Great chap
1/14 c13 Guest
Omgggg! Best chapter yet! I don’t know how many times I’ve read this but it still feels the same every time!
Omgggg! Best chapter yet! I don’t know how many times I’ve read this but it still feels the same every time!
1/4 c25 Marymary123
Better that Twilight!
Better that Twilight!
11/28/2021 c25 
4Halo221
Another intense story, but so well done! I adore the research and thought you put into your stories. It creates such a rich world and characters with depth well beyond the original source. I had to take breaks reading through this story, but what an exciting and emotional journey. Thank you, as always, for sharing your incredible efforts and talent!
4Halo221Another intense story, but so well done! I adore the research and thought you put into your stories. It creates such a rich world and characters with depth well beyond the original source. I had to take breaks reading through this story, but what an exciting and emotional journey. Thank you, as always, for sharing your incredible efforts and talent!
8/16/2021 c24 Dacian
I am Dacian. Thank you for acknowledging that my people have existed in present day Romanian territory since before Herodotus, before the Ancient Greeks, before the Romans invaded my ancestral land and renamed it after the city of Rome... In fact, look up "Peştera cu Oase" - the 2002 discovery of a human mandible in a cave located in southwestern Romania near the city of Anina, where human remains were found and carbon dated between 37,000 and 42,000 years old, proving the origin of the earliest "modern" Europeans.
I am Dacian. Thank you for acknowledging that my people have existed in present day Romanian territory since before Herodotus, before the Ancient Greeks, before the Romans invaded my ancestral land and renamed it after the city of Rome... In fact, look up "Peştera cu Oase" - the 2002 discovery of a human mandible in a cave located in southwestern Romania near the city of Anina, where human remains were found and carbon dated between 37,000 and 42,000 years old, proving the origin of the earliest "modern" Europeans.
7/19/2021 c1 4AlexandraaCullen
One of the best written fics I’ve read for sure! I had hopes for a happier ending but I understand why it ended as it did. I’m so heartbroken for Alice, I wish to know how her life continued afterward. It’s so hard to imagine Alice, such a happy perky girl to be broken like that. I’m glad Edward and Bella got their happy ending and wonder if they joined the remaining members of the Cullen family and what Bella’s friends and family must think, having her disappear like that. So many questions but you did wrap up the story beautifully. It will definitely keep me thinking.
4AlexandraaCullenOne of the best written fics I’ve read for sure! I had hopes for a happier ending but I understand why it ended as it did. I’m so heartbroken for Alice, I wish to know how her life continued afterward. It’s so hard to imagine Alice, such a happy perky girl to be broken like that. I’m glad Edward and Bella got their happy ending and wonder if they joined the remaining members of the Cullen family and what Bella’s friends and family must think, having her disappear like that. So many questions but you did wrap up the story beautifully. It will definitely keep me thinking.
7/12/2021 c25 Guest
Beautiful writing, beautiful story. Thank you for this. The best I've read.
Beautiful writing, beautiful story. Thank you for this. The best I've read.
5/2/2021 c25 atouchofcitron
phenomenally written. the story was gripping and even though a major character dies, the fight scenes were written so well and everything was worth it. i wish there was a sequel! thank you for writing this.
phenomenally written. the story was gripping and even though a major character dies, the fight scenes were written so well and everything was worth it. i wish there was a sequel! thank you for writing this.