for Nothing Casual6/19/2012 c5 
60IsidoraAngst
Damn. At least there was closure. I wanted to see something more happen between the two like more romance, but that's fine. Glad that you finished the story.
60IsidoraAngstDamn. At least there was closure. I wanted to see something more happen between the two like more romance, but that's fine. Glad that you finished the story.
11/13/2011 c4 Katya
First I have to say that I hope you won't abandon this story, cuz I absolutely love it and it would be such a shame. I love the fact that just when you think it's going predictable, it becomes unpredictable. You had me on the edge of my seat a few times, really. Your characterizations and descriptions are perfect. I can't wait to see how are you going to finish this. Kudos to you, great writer!
First I have to say that I hope you won't abandon this story, cuz I absolutely love it and it would be such a shame. I love the fact that just when you think it's going predictable, it becomes unpredictable. You had me on the edge of my seat a few times, really. Your characterizations and descriptions are perfect. I can't wait to see how are you going to finish this. Kudos to you, great writer!
11/10/2011 c4 Undertaker1465
Please write more I love this story!
Please write more I love this story!
6/14/2011 c4 Awesome Story
Finally! I have been waiting FOREVER for this chapter!^_^ I LOVE John M./Jeff H. and I LOVE where this story is heading *drooling*...naugty fanboy mind acting up^_~ I'm SOOO looking foreword to the next chapter! Please don't keep me waiting! I can't wait to read what happens next!^_^
Finally! I have been waiting FOREVER for this chapter!^_^ I LOVE John M./Jeff H. and I LOVE where this story is heading *drooling*...naugty fanboy mind acting up^_~ I'm SOOO looking foreword to the next chapter! Please don't keep me waiting! I can't wait to read what happens next!^_^
5/24/2011 c4 Rainbow Warrior
oh getting cofffeeeeee hahahaha funnyyyyyyy lol
well good chapter and I can't wait for the next one lol!
oh getting cofffeeeeee hahahaha funnyyyyyyy lol
well good chapter and I can't wait for the next one lol!
5/24/2011 c3 Rainbow Warrior
Come hither my darling dear I wish to tell you about this chapter! hahahaha I could imagine John saying that (lol not really)
omg they kissed! hahahaha i don't know why but that scene made me crack up. I think it's because of Jeff's reactions. lol Great job!
Come hither my darling dear I wish to tell you about this chapter! hahahaha I could imagine John saying that (lol not really)
omg they kissed! hahahaha i don't know why but that scene made me crack up. I think it's because of Jeff's reactions. lol Great job!
5/24/2011 c2 PEDOBEARR
These are my two favorite lines this chapter:
"But no matter how wrong it felt, it always felt five times more right."
and "Oh really, Jeffrey?"
lol they made me giggle and laugh when i would get distracted and read from there
good work! :D
These are my two favorite lines this chapter:
"But no matter how wrong it felt, it always felt five times more right."
and "Oh really, Jeffrey?"
lol they made me giggle and laugh when i would get distracted and read from there
good work! :D
5/24/2011 c4 10slashdlite
John kissed Jeff alas! I feel sorry for Jeff, he doesn't really know how he feels towards John and the worst part is he can't tell Matt, Beth or anyone.
The second kiss in the bedroom was hot. I wished Jeff's phone didn't ring .. lol
A third kiss in the cafeteria ... John doesn't seem to want to quit. He's getting bolder by the minute. Would Jeff finally cave and give in to him?
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
10slashdliteJohn kissed Jeff alas! I feel sorry for Jeff, he doesn't really know how he feels towards John and the worst part is he can't tell Matt, Beth or anyone.
The second kiss in the bedroom was hot. I wished Jeff's phone didn't ring .. lol
A third kiss in the cafeteria ... John doesn't seem to want to quit. He's getting bolder by the minute. Would Jeff finally cave and give in to him?
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
5/24/2011 c1 pedobear
this is cute! i like! You make me smile with long chapters!
PEDOBEARRRRRR
this is cute! i like! You make me smile with long chapters!
PEDOBEARRRRRR
5/24/2011 c4 60IsidoraAngst
This story is really interesting. I can't wait and see what happens next.
60IsidoraAngstThis story is really interesting. I can't wait and see what happens next.
12/28/2010 c3 rosechan4
Wonderful chapter 3 Keep'em coming!
Wonderful chapter 3 Keep'em coming!
12/2/2010 c3 10slashdlite
What a great update! I enjoyed the way you had John playing mind games with Jeff. I waited and you finally got John to finally kiss him! ...lol... Now, Jeff's more confused than ever!
Great chapter!
10slashdliteWhat a great update! I enjoyed the way you had John playing mind games with Jeff. I waited and you finally got John to finally kiss him! ...lol... Now, Jeff's more confused than ever!
Great chapter!
8/22/2010 c2 rosechan4
Yay! XD I loved it~ Please update soon!
Yay! XD I loved it~ Please update soon!