for Hiding In The Death Note9/17/2021 c1 Sparklespuk
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12/27/2020 c1 
2Mike Kromer
Definitely would love to see more of this. Definitely emotional at times. You know she would love it if he impregnated her lol. Wonder if they would team up as it where to get their revenge of sorts lol.
2Mike KromerDefinitely would love to see more of this. Definitely emotional at times. You know she would love it if he impregnated her lol. Wonder if they would team up as it where to get their revenge of sorts lol.
12/21/2016 c1 Guest
Wow. Just, wow.
First off, I'm not really a fan of this pairing. I don't hate it, but this isn't one of my favorites in the fandom.
However, you have given me something to consider - not just romantically, but as two beings, who've lived in the same house all of their life and share many of the same experiences.
This story is well-written, believiable, and enjoyable to read. It's implications are great, and while I don't mind stories of a more sexual nature at all, this is just as nice. I wasn't annoyed at all by excessive words and metaphors (purple prose), and I love that stuff.
Overall, this is not only one of my favorite fanfics in the fandom, but in general. I look forward to reading more of your works. Keep it up!
Wow. Just, wow.
First off, I'm not really a fan of this pairing. I don't hate it, but this isn't one of my favorites in the fandom.
However, you have given me something to consider - not just romantically, but as two beings, who've lived in the same house all of their life and share many of the same experiences.
This story is well-written, believiable, and enjoyable to read. It's implications are great, and while I don't mind stories of a more sexual nature at all, this is just as nice. I wasn't annoyed at all by excessive words and metaphors (purple prose), and I love that stuff.
Overall, this is not only one of my favorite fanfics in the fandom, but in general. I look forward to reading more of your works. Keep it up!
11/17/2015 c1 Author of Despair
I always wanted Sayu or Near to start using the Death Note to continue the series.
I always wanted Sayu or Near to start using the Death Note to continue the series.
7/13/2015 c1 Girl
Love the way you tell the story:3
Love the way you tell the story:3
12/6/2013 c1 4TheLaughingMan1
Odd, but for some reason I like it. I'd love to read a story about Sayu being tempted by Light, either to be the next Kira or otherwise. One that's well written. I think you could do it.
4TheLaughingMan1Odd, but for some reason I like it. I'd love to read a story about Sayu being tempted by Light, either to be the next Kira or otherwise. One that's well written. I think you could do it.
2/25/2012 c1 3Sen Ningyu no Sasori
Honestly, I loved it. I'm a big fan of incest to begin with, but you don't find many incest stories that have emotion, and yours had it by the bucket full. Keep writing Dude.
3Sen Ningyu no SasoriHonestly, I loved it. I'm a big fan of incest to begin with, but you don't find many incest stories that have emotion, and yours had it by the bucket full. Keep writing Dude.
2/8/2012 c1 19Nemrut
I like the idea of Sayu being someone who would avenge her brother like that. Her being in the know while letting everyone else think would be like Kira.
19NemrutI like the idea of Sayu being someone who would avenge her brother like that. Her being in the know while letting everyone else think would be like Kira.
7/5/2011 c1 DragonforceX
Hehehe...
All good, but don't forget that as code-names, Near and Mello don't work, not to mention Mello was already did.
Though in all fairness, I doubt Sayu cares.
Hehehe...
All good, but don't forget that as code-names, Near and Mello don't work, not to mention Mello was already did.
Though in all fairness, I doubt Sayu cares.
12/30/2010 c1 xXNovemberRainXx
I loved it...And how it descriebes Sayu as a smart girl doing all that stuff...
I loved it...And how it descriebes Sayu as a smart girl doing all that stuff...