for Whispers in the Dark5/30/2010 c1 
8Beautiful Feather
Thumps up for your first story pretty gurl. I am not to pleased on the length since I know you can do better than this. I'll let it slide since this is your first try. If you ever need some random person on the internet to edit your work, just let me know. I would be more than willing to point out your faults!
B.F.
8Beautiful FeatherThumps up for your first story pretty gurl. I am not to pleased on the length since I know you can do better than this. I'll let it slide since this is your first try. If you ever need some random person on the internet to edit your work, just let me know. I would be more than willing to point out your faults!
B.F.
5/29/2010 c1 manjoumethunder
This is actually really good!
It's better than some of the stuff here on fanfiction, great job on your first story! :)
This is actually really good!
It's better than some of the stuff here on fanfiction, great job on your first story! :)