
5/6/2018 c2 Borello
damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.
damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.
7/31/2015 c1 Lagoon7
Christ this story is terrible, I thought id give it a chance but jesus, this is the wost piece of shit i have ever layed eyes on.
Consider deleting this story. PLEASE.
Christ this story is terrible, I thought id give it a chance but jesus, this is the wost piece of shit i have ever layed eyes on.
Consider deleting this story. PLEASE.
5/4/2015 c2 Guest Review
This chapter doesn't appear to be a part of the 'story' and three years is a long time to leave something like this up as a 'temporary chapter'.
It might be an idea to remove it, in case the site owners get around to doing a purge of things which break the site rules like this.
This chapter doesn't appear to be a part of the 'story' and three years is a long time to leave something like this up as a 'temporary chapter'.
It might be an idea to remove it, in case the site owners get around to doing a purge of things which break the site rules like this.
5/26/2013 c1 exiles soul
this chapter looks quite good. and with the golem's naruto will have pretty good suqad wth them em i right.
this chapter looks quite good. and with the golem's naruto will have pretty good suqad wth them em i right.
6/5/2012 c2 jack
love your story so can you update soon?
love your story so can you update soon?
2/26/2011 c1 Swordhunter89
hope you can update this story it really seems good. you might want to double space though just to make things easier for the reader.
hope you can update this story it really seems good. you might want to double space though just to make things easier for the reader.