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3/31/2011 c27 May Drew 4every
Nice story keep it up please.
3/31/2011 c27 10SilverLunaMoon
Great chapter^^ I really enjoyed it :D
3/30/2011 c27 3JiraiyaTheToadSage
i freakin loved that last chapter! :D

and i love this whole fanfic in general :P

3/30/2011 c27 xxxmizuki-chanxxx
I love how the story is going so far well done buy I was wondering when naruto and Sakura are going to meet again like in 2 chapters or 3 ? Because I want to see how Sakura reacts when she sees him :)
3/30/2011 c27 5Sentinel07
Marvelous story so far!

Hopefully in the future, we'll see more interaction between Naruto and Sakura.
3/29/2011 c27 DemosJones
It was great to see this story pop up in my inbox twice in quick succession.

I'm curious as to where we are in this story. I feel like we're in the beginning of it, as things still feel to be in a setup phase. yet we're 27 chapters in and many things have happened.

I will admit that I hope you send Anko's team to Land of the Snow as Naruto has been separated from Sakura for so long that... well, I want more of them together, which might also help pull down the number of view point characters we have if more of them were in parallel.
3/29/2011 c27 the.curri.of.life16
Omg luv this chapter, especially the fighting scenes. I'm sad that Chiyo and Ebizo died but I guess it had to happen for the plot to continue. Anyway as I said before I really liked it. Don't stop writing and don't take too long either!
3/29/2011 c27 Kyuubi king of demons
hey another good chapter thanks for the awesome story so far
3/29/2011 c27 3Don 77
wow very Nice
3/29/2011 c27 Anonymous
Awesome fight! But I think you use the words "in shock" too much. Surely they have more emotions than that.
3/29/2011 c27 24thedarkpokemaster
Nice chapter I just loved the whole fight on this chapter please keep it up
3/29/2011 c27 Kaydreams
Well at least Izumi got out of the battle, but she isn't out of the woods yet. That was an awesome battle! Very well written! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
3/29/2011 c27 3saveme57
It's so sad that the Honored siblings are dead. Izumi should join akatsuki thts the only safe place to go. Great yet sad chapter.
3/29/2011 c27 1angel897
damm dramatic and sad chapter, but still great job
3/29/2011 c27 5Micheal the Archangel
Impressive. Two chapters in two days. And this one was full of drama and action...I loved it. Now may I make a suggestion? While Izumi is running, she collapses from dehydration and faints. She wakes up to find kiriya taking care of her in his camp. She tells him what happened and he revealed his parents worked with chiyo to help the alliances enemies years earlier. They died protecting him and the siblings. which means it's up to him to help protect her. Then hentells her to come with him to akatsuki, saying she'd be safest there.

Then hiruko finds them and fights with them. Izumi beats him with the scroll, but it's kiriya who deals the fatal blow and sends his head to sasori as a warning to him, and a statement that he's next.

Well, tell me what you think?
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