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5/27/2010 c1 3shadow uzumaki
I knew it would've been some kind of 'reverse Akatsuki.' No names on the group yet, I suppose? It seems interesting, I think you have a few grammar errors here and there, other than that, I hope you continue.
5/27/2010 c1 liveto r and r
This is a new idea. Or its new to me. Keep writing awesome fics.

P.S. I was trying to pronounce 'Prajñā' for like 10 minutes before I think I got it right XD
5/27/2010 c1 RnR66
If keep up the pace you wrote with then you may have a badass story
5/27/2010 c1 Sir Deadpool
Hmm, this looks intersing I look forward to seeing the next chapter,
5/27/2010 c1 9Slicerness
boring backstory? it was quite the opposite actually. i was reading with the ferver of a volus winning a high stakes card game. once i started reading i didn't stop until it was over, and then realized that fifteen minutes had gone by... time well spent.

so is naruto their ace in the whole or did they just 'kidnap' him so he wouldn't be turned into a weapon?

if it's the former they may want to put him through sage training early, and make his seal 'complete'. danzo and his god-modding sharingan collection will be near impossible to beat otherwise.

anyway, i would say more but i need to use the restroom really really badly. see ya!
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