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12/29/2011 c1 9Goldencity
Wow...that was completely, amazingly, absolutely beautiful. It was just perfect.

Every line was wonderful, but here are some of my favorites:

The story's come true; the fire-eater was you.

Your marten runs in, oh, give me peace, Gwin

for what reason does my heart have to rise?

And then I loved how you ended with 'And you close my mouth with a kiss', as that was how the chapter ended in Inkdeath.

It was all just so beautiful. Thanks for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.
12/22/2010 c1 17InkWeaverabc
oh that is great... Dustfinger is truely awesome and his relationship with Roxanne is buetiful in it's tradgedy. You portry her grief so eloquently and it really made me sad. I loved it!
12/5/2010 c1 mary rose
o that was so beautiful...you're good at expressing emotions eloquently, you wove your words into soft, human love, oh Roxane... You could continue this...poems for each(well not EACH, but MOST) inkheart characters...you know, Meggie's heart, confused and torn between the two boys she loves, Dustfinger's love for Roxane, Farid's longing for Dustfinger...
6/22/2010 c1 17Mad Mararuder Girl
Wow, thats is all I can say. wow
5/29/2010 c1 Welcome2DaHouseOfFun
Aw, bless, poor rocky, poor dusty!

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