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3/23/2013 c1 Makiharu
:)
5/20/2011 c1 13SJAandDWfan
really good!
3/21/2011 c1 19EvilGeniusBookWorm13
This was really good. I liked the bit of jayley in there! Nice jib! I meant job...
7/24/2010 c1 a person u probably dont know
i realy like your fanfic! it is very well written! either you are a seasoned writer or you are naturally gifted with words! Really inspiring!
5/28/2010 c1 28Sonny at Twilight
Wow. I've got to say, I'm pretty impressed that you only just started watching the show. You did a great job writing them all in character and getting the humor in there.

As for all of the technical information I thought you also did really well. No big or small mistakes that I can spot.

I'll admit, I struggle a little bit with the technical monster, fighting, and weapon bits when writing for "The Troop" since I'm not that great at that kind of stuff.

You're really good at it though.

And I'm so glad that you're going to write another story for "The Troop" and post it soon since I really enjoyed reading this one. Besides that, this category could really use some more good stories.

Fantastic job. :-)

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