
10/15/2016 c1
6SoraMalfoySlythern
girl dont go back to that father of your! Jason Todd we got a man to shoot down. Daddy dear is going down. grr.

girl dont go back to that father of your! Jason Todd we got a man to shoot down. Daddy dear is going down. grr.
9/19/2014 c1 kms5665
1) She heard about how he was called The Riddler and she secretly couldn't help but admire him for his intelligence and his skillful work in giving clues and committing crimes. She knew it was probably easy for most people to commit crimes and kill people, she knew Riddler avoided killing people simply to show his intelligence and she admired him for it, not that she would ever tell anyone.
- Those reasons above are the same reasons why The Riddler is my favorite Batman villain. I usually don't review unless I have something useful to say or I find a piece of work astonishing, this chapter falls under both categories. Characterization, tone, pace, and style, it's all exceptionally well done. Your writing is magnificent. I am able to see the story clearly in my head as I read and in my opinion, that’s a mark of a great author.
1) She heard about how he was called The Riddler and she secretly couldn't help but admire him for his intelligence and his skillful work in giving clues and committing crimes. She knew it was probably easy for most people to commit crimes and kill people, she knew Riddler avoided killing people simply to show his intelligence and she admired him for it, not that she would ever tell anyone.
- Those reasons above are the same reasons why The Riddler is my favorite Batman villain. I usually don't review unless I have something useful to say or I find a piece of work astonishing, this chapter falls under both categories. Characterization, tone, pace, and style, it's all exceptionally well done. Your writing is magnificent. I am able to see the story clearly in my head as I read and in my opinion, that’s a mark of a great author.
10/4/2013 c1
53NightcatMau
I really enjoyed this! Your Riddler is perfect! He's scary as a criminal, arrogant because he's so intelligent, yet has enough humanity in him to care about Sheyera and just enough warmth to make him magnetic. Bravo! :)

I really enjoyed this! Your Riddler is perfect! He's scary as a criminal, arrogant because he's so intelligent, yet has enough humanity in him to care about Sheyera and just enough warmth to make him magnetic. Bravo! :)
5/6/2013 c1 Guest
Holy shit that so cool!
Holy shit that so cool!
10/14/2012 c1
37Ersatz Einstein
Your character is intriguing, and although your spelling, grammar, and punctuation need work, I'd like to see more of this sort of thing. Have you considered another series?

Your character is intriguing, and although your spelling, grammar, and punctuation need work, I'd like to see more of this sort of thing. Have you considered another series?
7/27/2012 c1
13Kotahsouras
Okay, so I don't normally go through the stories of my reviewers, but GOD DAMN :D Can I marry this story? or you? Because I LOVE THIS. SO MUCH. THE FEELS. THEY GET ME.

Okay, so I don't normally go through the stories of my reviewers, but GOD DAMN :D Can I marry this story? or you? Because I LOVE THIS. SO MUCH. THE FEELS. THEY GET ME.
7/15/2010 c1 JasonTKD
Luckily for the teen's dad that she isn'n talking to the Joker. Even HE hates child abusers-well, the Joker from the comic books does, at least.
Luckily for the teen's dad that she isn'n talking to the Joker. Even HE hates child abusers-well, the Joker from the comic books does, at least.
7/10/2010 c1 El
Please write a sequel! I really enjoyed your story.
Please write a sequel! I really enjoyed your story.
7/7/2010 c1
1201Shadow Angel
wow! that was good. i say that you should write a sequal and involve magg... i mean shyarea helping riddler or something.
peace out! :)

wow! that was good. i say that you should write a sequal and involve magg... i mean shyarea helping riddler or something.
peace out! :)
7/3/2010 c1
6ghost13579
need more! i want to see Maggie Whitlock's dad suffer terrorbly at the hands of the ridler

need more! i want to see Maggie Whitlock's dad suffer terrorbly at the hands of the ridler