for Clash of the Benders6/12/2010 c4 
15bk00
omg. I teared up a little when I read this. so great. Naruto calls her 'Hina' and she calls him 'Naru'. I feel so warm and fuzzy inside! Really magnificent work. can't wait for ch. 5!
15bk00omg. I teared up a little when I read this. so great. Naruto calls her 'Hina' and she calls him 'Naru'. I feel so warm and fuzzy inside! Really magnificent work. can't wait for ch. 5!
6/3/2010 c3 bk00
Perfect! Great way for them to meet! And I was right with the bending of the Naruto crew! Yes! Really great chapter btw, can't wait for the next update!
Perfect! Great way for them to meet! And I was right with the bending of the Naruto crew! Yes! Really great chapter btw, can't wait for the next update!
6/1/2010 c2 15bk00
So second review in under and hour! I think this and will be great! Naruhina already? And let me guess ZuTen as a pairing right? That should be fun to write! I know Naruto and Aang will most likely be close, Sasuke and Zuko might get along well, Katara and Hinata will probably be best friends, and Toph and Sakura will probably butt head once in a while. Just guessing though. I have high hopes for this story! Believe it!
15bk00So second review in under and hour! I think this and will be great! Naruhina already? And let me guess ZuTen as a pairing right? That should be fun to write! I know Naruto and Aang will most likely be close, Sasuke and Zuko might get along well, Katara and Hinata will probably be best friends, and Toph and Sakura will probably butt head once in a while. Just guessing though. I have high hopes for this story! Believe it!
6/1/2010 c1 bk00
I love you. I really do. Combine to of my favorite stories and characters ever in one story? Can we say fanboy heaven much? Love this!
I love you. I really do. Combine to of my favorite stories and characters ever in one story? Can we say fanboy heaven much? Love this!
5/31/2010 c1 9Sun Daughter
Interesting job. Your storyline's not exactly creative, but you're pulling it together nicely so it has a good flow. I don't see any spelling or grammar errors, though you have some awkward wording every now and then. It wasn't too noticeable, and something you could easily catch if you read it out loud to yourself. :) I would also spell out your numbers, but other than that it looked good.
Now for the praise! *claps hands* Well, I loved your descriptions, they were very life-like and realistically done. Awesome job, this was a good length, and yeah. This looked nice. I'll subscribe to see where this goes.
Keep writing and have a nice day.
~Summer
9Sun DaughterInteresting job. Your storyline's not exactly creative, but you're pulling it together nicely so it has a good flow. I don't see any spelling or grammar errors, though you have some awkward wording every now and then. It wasn't too noticeable, and something you could easily catch if you read it out loud to yourself. :) I would also spell out your numbers, but other than that it looked good.
Now for the praise! *claps hands* Well, I loved your descriptions, they were very life-like and realistically done. Awesome job, this was a good length, and yeah. This looked nice. I'll subscribe to see where this goes.
Keep writing and have a nice day.
~Summer