for Children of the Ancients1/25/2017 c5 random reader
Very intersecting but also very difficult to follow up its timeline sequence, as it's integrating several movies characteristics into one universe, including
transformers
Babylon 5
Battlestar Galactica
Star Trek
Halo
Mass effect
Star gate
Thank you
Very intersecting but also very difficult to follow up its timeline sequence, as it's integrating several movies characteristics into one universe, including
transformers
Babylon 5
Battlestar Galactica
Star Trek
Halo
Mass effect
Star gate
Thank you
6/22/2015 c1 SaintMichael95
This grammar was absolutely horrid. Especially the last paragraph, if it can even be called that... I sure hope it gets better.
This grammar was absolutely horrid. Especially the last paragraph, if it can even be called that... I sure hope it gets better.
2/16/2015 c17 ShadowCub
Wesley Crusher is a pain in the ass, no one likes him at all and much like the TV show he shows up where he has no right to be.
Wesley Crusher is a pain in the ass, no one likes him at all and much like the TV show he shows up where he has no right to be.
9/4/2014 c16 
9Robo Reader 21
As a massive fan of Gundam, I can say with absolute certainty that the EA and ZAFT forces would preform atrociously and terribly against the Reaper force. The Reapers defense system, their GUARDIAN laser equivalent, would tear apart MS and ships with perfect targeting. Their lasers, Thanix, even the spinal mounted gun will vaporize a MS and snipe ship well beyond visual range. Their own weapons wouldn't do much of anything on Reaper hulls. And these Reapers have been upgraded. In fact, why is Kira in the Strike? Unless that machine has had major upgrade and modification, he ain't gonna last long.
9Robo Reader 21As a massive fan of Gundam, I can say with absolute certainty that the EA and ZAFT forces would preform atrociously and terribly against the Reaper force. The Reapers defense system, their GUARDIAN laser equivalent, would tear apart MS and ships with perfect targeting. Their lasers, Thanix, even the spinal mounted gun will vaporize a MS and snipe ship well beyond visual range. Their own weapons wouldn't do much of anything on Reaper hulls. And these Reapers have been upgraded. In fact, why is Kira in the Strike? Unless that machine has had major upgrade and modification, he ain't gonna last long.
5/6/2013 c11 ShadowCub
I really want to see 99.9% less of KIRA because the idea that he can have any influence on what is happening is too crazy for words, and also no pairings, this is war and I'm kinda tired of all of the females in the story googly eyed over every guy they meet.
I really want to see 99.9% less of KIRA because the idea that he can have any influence on what is happening is too crazy for words, and also no pairings, this is war and I'm kinda tired of all of the females in the story googly eyed over every guy they meet.
5/6/2013 c14 ShadowCub
I like it, was afraid of the many, many, many characters that were in previous chapters especially all of the teen characters that were more annoying than Wesley Crusher in being involved when they had no reason to be.
Would rather see the fighting between factions rather than characters fighting.
I like it, was afraid of the many, many, many characters that were in previous chapters especially all of the teen characters that were more annoying than Wesley Crusher in being involved when they had no reason to be.
Would rather see the fighting between factions rather than characters fighting.
8/28/2012 c13 9Robo Reader 21
Actually the Colonials have drones. Its well establish. And the Cylons didn't necessarily go rouge, they were not bound by any restrictions what-so-ever and were made to learn, adapt, and evolve. They wanting to be free from their arrogant, careless slavers was inevitable.
Personally I hope the Reapers take a few shots at Halo Earth and the PLANTS. That will knock a sense of reality to the dumb people of SEED.
9Robo Reader 21Actually the Colonials have drones. Its well establish. And the Cylons didn't necessarily go rouge, they were not bound by any restrictions what-so-ever and were made to learn, adapt, and evolve. They wanting to be free from their arrogant, careless slavers was inevitable.
Personally I hope the Reapers take a few shots at Halo Earth and the PLANTS. That will knock a sense of reality to the dumb people of SEED.
8/28/2012 c13 ShadowCub
They should really make the colonials stop calling them the 13th tribe every time I hear that I want to scream.
They should really make the colonials stop calling them the 13th tribe every time I hear that I want to scream.
5/16/2012 c12 ShadowCub
I really enjoyed this story until it turned into the Kira Alexander story, where the young kid does what billions of adults can't and saved the universe.
He is as annoying as Wesley Crusher and is killing the story.
I really enjoyed this story until it turned into the Kira Alexander story, where the young kid does what billions of adults can't and saved the universe.
He is as annoying as Wesley Crusher and is killing the story.