for Anniversary5/19/2012 c1 
6Anelya
*sobs* So sad... Like the description and the way you can express how he feels. The way you write - with the pauses - it's a good style, and one that I do enjoy.
I feel kinda sad for him... I hope that Ginny didn't end up dying. I'll never know, will I?
6Anelya*sobs* So sad... Like the description and the way you can express how he feels. The way you write - with the pauses - it's a good style, and one that I do enjoy.
I feel kinda sad for him... I hope that Ginny didn't end up dying. I'll never know, will I?
6/2/2010 c1 77Boogum
Well, damn. Draco certainly got the short end of the stick that time.
I like this, though I think some of it seemed a bit too, erm (how can I say this?) flowery for Draco to say/think. Love conquering all, in particular, really stood out to me as being a bit OOC.
Still, it was good for what it is. Now I need to read some fluff.
77BoogumWell, damn. Draco certainly got the short end of the stick that time.
I like this, though I think some of it seemed a bit too, erm (how can I say this?) flowery for Draco to say/think. Love conquering all, in particular, really stood out to me as being a bit OOC.
Still, it was good for what it is. Now I need to read some fluff.
6/2/2010 c1 18sonea91
Ah, poor Draco, dying, knowing that Ginny will probably be next!
You did a beautfiul job at capturing his feelings and describing the situation, and most importantly, you very successfully conveyed that sense of angst you were probably aiming for. Great work=)
18sonea91Ah, poor Draco, dying, knowing that Ginny will probably be next!
You did a beautfiul job at capturing his feelings and describing the situation, and most importantly, you very successfully conveyed that sense of angst you were probably aiming for. Great work=)
6/2/2010 c1 3chromeknickers
This is very dark. I am always a sucker for the Draco turned spy theme. This was nicely done. I do like your descriptions, even though they are of Draco in pain and about to die. :( Still, very nice.
3chromeknickersThis is very dark. I am always a sucker for the Draco turned spy theme. This was nicely done. I do like your descriptions, even though they are of Draco in pain and about to die. :( Still, very nice.
6/2/2010 c1 003359833xyQq
Urgh! - I like it, a lot (is that bad ? I just have a thing for angst) . I like the descriptions you use, such as him laying on his own puke, you have some interesting imaginary, and I like how Voldemort taunts him with the unsent letter before killing him.
Nice response =)
Urgh! - I like it, a lot (is that bad ? I just have a thing for angst) . I like the descriptions you use, such as him laying on his own puke, you have some interesting imaginary, and I like how Voldemort taunts him with the unsent letter before killing him.
Nice response =)