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for a narnia love story

10/16/2016 c11 pauch.fal
Update please
1/12/2012 c11 2Weirdo98
Please update! I love it!
11/8/2011 c11 princess emma of narnia
update asap
7/15/2011 c11 6BleckBlah5956
i love this. update as soon as you can please:)
1/20/2011 c11 Princess of Narnia 1192
Please please please write more? Thanks! Princess...xx
1/14/2011 c2 iloveeveryone
u r awesome
6/5/2010 c7 kAsS3695
please revive emma we need a love story in this considering the title.

love your story though

post more soon
6/5/2010 c1 jjjc
No big problem.

It isn't only your story that says Peter's 16. I just thought I'd point it out, and anyway your doing WAY better in creativity than some writers I've seen, they just copy the movie completely! At least you added charectors and mixed stuuf up.

Really, the only thing wrong is the ages and the periods.
6/5/2010 c2 southernbelle12
no i cant help it becase i have dislecsia *(i know i spelled it wrong)

but thx for reviewing even if it wasnt called for

and sry i know it was just a suggestion but cut me same slack i got 5 theth pulled that day and came home to that sry for getting so mad
6/4/2010 c2 jjjc
hey hey hey! It's just a suggestion.

You CAN help with the " . " I think it'd be way easier to read that way.
6/3/2010 c2 2southernbelle12
im sorry i didnt know there ages but it kinda late now

and i cant help it with the . so lay off
6/2/2010 c2 jjjc
Peter's 13! It makes me irritated at people think

he's 16,I know that it's good for romances but 16 is too old to have your first magical adventure, and besides C.S Lewis

wrote him as 13.

You use periods way too often.

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