for War of the Roses3/16 c34 Guest
Zero stars for this fic.
None of the characters are likeable and none have any redeeming qualities.
The plot is convoluted.
Not the best written story either in terms of writing.
I had to skim to get through it.
If anyone claims this is the best fic they have read, they are either lying or they have not read many fics.
TL: DR there are better fanfics on this site. This one is a skip. Dont waste your time.
Zero stars for this fic.
None of the characters are likeable and none have any redeeming qualities.
The plot is convoluted.
Not the best written story either in terms of writing.
I had to skim to get through it.
If anyone claims this is the best fic they have read, they are either lying or they have not read many fics.
TL: DR there are better fanfics on this site. This one is a skip. Dont waste your time.
3/16 c34 Guest
This story was clearly written by a teenager.
I hate Edward. He was only redeemed to Bella because others were worse than him. That doesnt make him a better person though
This story was clearly written by a teenager.
I hate Edward. He was only redeemed to Bella because others were worse than him. That doesnt make him a better person though
3/16 c27 Guest
This doesnt change that edward chose to cheat.
This doesnt change that edward chose to cheat.
3/16 c24 Guest
Riley did not react well. He isnt perfect but I guess bella keep choosing shit men. Then again she is treating Riley liks he is subpar.
She doesnt need Edwards permission to move in with Riley. She is an adult.
Riley did not react well. He isnt perfect but I guess bella keep choosing shit men. Then again she is treating Riley liks he is subpar.
She doesnt need Edwards permission to move in with Riley. She is an adult.
3/16 c23 Guest
Imagine talking to a baby about punishing them
Imagine talking to a baby about punishing them
3/16 c18 Guest
Edward is already a terrible father. He disgusts me.
Edward is already a terrible father. He disgusts me.
3/16 c15 Guest
The big asshole has a problem with rings being thrown in his face but none with getting it wet in another woman...
Its terrible that she hurt him but doesnt consider her pain at his cheating. His terrible behaviours. His refusal to stop acting like a petulant child? He is fighting for his ego not his marriage. I have yet to see any good in this human trash. Why was she ever even with him. Just ew. DUMP HIM.
The big asshole has a problem with rings being thrown in his face but none with getting it wet in another woman...
Its terrible that she hurt him but doesnt consider her pain at his cheating. His terrible behaviours. His refusal to stop acting like a petulant child? He is fighting for his ego not his marriage. I have yet to see any good in this human trash. Why was she ever even with him. Just ew. DUMP HIM.
3/16 c3 Guest
Edward is human trash.
Bella felt lowest of the low and could not help it.
She probably felt broken and not like a good wife and he throws that in her face? He breaks his marriage vows because she isnt making him feel good about himself in bed? Wow.
How about taking a moment to understand your wife. As a doctor you should know, trying to get pregnant doesnt mean sex just ovulating. You can have sex anytime and get pregnant. As a doctor he should know both of them should get checked just on case there is a reason they arent having a baby.
He sucks both as a husband and a doctor. To hell with him. He can have his Lauren. Bella needs to big fat dump him.
He has no excuse. None.
Edward is human trash.
Bella felt lowest of the low and could not help it.
She probably felt broken and not like a good wife and he throws that in her face? He breaks his marriage vows because she isnt making him feel good about himself in bed? Wow.
How about taking a moment to understand your wife. As a doctor you should know, trying to get pregnant doesnt mean sex just ovulating. You can have sex anytime and get pregnant. As a doctor he should know both of them should get checked just on case there is a reason they arent having a baby.
He sucks both as a husband and a doctor. To hell with him. He can have his Lauren. Bella needs to big fat dump him.
He has no excuse. None.
3/11 c34 Guest
Well, prostitute, another fucked up story from you with your despicable main characters.
Well, prostitute, another fucked up story from you with your despicable main characters.
1/14 c1 Allear
I've been reading the reviews, and I must add my two cents even though I suspect that you're kind of over other people's opinions by now. I think you did a really good job with this story. Thank you. Yes, there are some plot choices that I didn't like (like the Riley/Victoria plot that felt too farfetched), but in total, you did an amazing job. I'm sorry that you've had to endure so much negativity in the comments. In my opinion, it's unjust and unfair.
I've been reading the reviews, and I must add my two cents even though I suspect that you're kind of over other people's opinions by now. I think you did a really good job with this story. Thank you. Yes, there are some plot choices that I didn't like (like the Riley/Victoria plot that felt too farfetched), but in total, you did an amazing job. I'm sorry that you've had to endure so much negativity in the comments. In my opinion, it's unjust and unfair.
9/20/2023 c34 Guest
Wow. Bella learned the difference between a cheater and someone who cheated. What a load of BS. Edward was a cheater. Cheaters can change if they want to. They can be redeemed. But I will say this. I don’t think I’ve ever read an E and B I dislike more, so congratulations.
Wow. Bella learned the difference between a cheater and someone who cheated. What a load of BS. Edward was a cheater. Cheaters can change if they want to. They can be redeemed. But I will say this. I don’t think I’ve ever read an E and B I dislike more, so congratulations.
5/3/2023 c30 zorgloup
Um, no. Dating other people is not the solution to build a healthy relationship.
Um, no. Dating other people is not the solution to build a healthy relationship.