
11/19/2020 c27 lashawn
I absolutely HATE infidelity in general especially reading about it in fanfics. Yet somehow I stumbled across your story and was intrigued enough to read it. Furthermore I discovered I actually enjoyed reading this. A lot of fan fictions have drama just for the sake of drama that’s frivolous. However your drama had character building, deep introspective reflections, and I feel like your characters came out better having gone through their trails and tribulations. No one was perfect just because they were beautiful or rich. Everyone had issues even the picture perfect couples. Thanks for writing this story it is amazing.
I absolutely HATE infidelity in general especially reading about it in fanfics. Yet somehow I stumbled across your story and was intrigued enough to read it. Furthermore I discovered I actually enjoyed reading this. A lot of fan fictions have drama just for the sake of drama that’s frivolous. However your drama had character building, deep introspective reflections, and I feel like your characters came out better having gone through their trails and tribulations. No one was perfect just because they were beautiful or rich. Everyone had issues even the picture perfect couples. Thanks for writing this story it is amazing.
10/9/2020 c25 Guest
So, I don't think "everything is split in half" is quite that literal.
Bella was entitled to half of Edward's earnings (not his trust, but his earnings) because she was his support.
Just because Riley might marry Bella doesn't mean he automatically gets half the $ (that she had before their relationship)when they divorce.
So, I don't think "everything is split in half" is quite that literal.
Bella was entitled to half of Edward's earnings (not his trust, but his earnings) because she was his support.
Just because Riley might marry Bella doesn't mean he automatically gets half the $ (that she had before their relationship)when they divorce.
10/11/2020 c13 alinaparkerson
"Who the hell did she think she was? I was the fucking man of this relationship…she was not going to leave me! I could not handle that."
How did you not cringe writing AND PUBLISHING this?
"Who the hell did she think she was? I was the fucking man of this relationship…she was not going to leave me! I could not handle that."
How did you not cringe writing AND PUBLISHING this?
10/8/2020 c12 Guest
Edward seems to have anger issues. He's truly an entitled, spoiled brat.
Edward seems to have anger issues. He's truly an entitled, spoiled brat.
5/26/2020 c18 shoutout23
"Why do you always turn this around on me? Why can't you see how badly you hurt me! I tried to help you! Do you remember that? I stood by you every time your pregnancy tests came back negative. I offered alternatives to you…because I was willing to do everything for you…infertility treatments…adoption…surrogacy…anything to get you a baby…but it wasn't good enough for you…I wasn't good enough for you! I even begged you to go to couples counseling with me!"
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So, does this make cheating acceptable? Tf
"Why do you always turn this around on me? Why can't you see how badly you hurt me! I tried to help you! Do you remember that? I stood by you every time your pregnancy tests came back negative. I offered alternatives to you…because I was willing to do everything for you…infertility treatments…adoption…surrogacy…anything to get you a baby…but it wasn't good enough for you…I wasn't good enough for you! I even begged you to go to couples counseling with me!"
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So, does this make cheating acceptable? Tf
5/12/2020 c25 discreetfrog11
shit riley is pissing me off the Dickhead. i cant .
believe this
but this is a very good story. excuse my language i dont often swear that much but i cant help it this time
shit riley is pissing me off the Dickhead. i cant .
believe this
but this is a very good story. excuse my language i dont often swear that much but i cant help it this time