for This Play Between The Sheets6/28/2010 c1 En3rgi
I'm only halfway through the first chapter, but I'll settle with " O_O :D" for now. Also lol'd @ Morgana knowing of the naughty present (collar) that Merlin prepared. xDxD
I'm only halfway through the first chapter, but I'll settle with " O_O :D" for now. Also lol'd @ Morgana knowing of the naughty present (collar) that Merlin prepared. xDxD
6/22/2010 c4 
8GothyShadow
wow that fic was absolutely brilliant. i have just read an extract of sons and lovers, which is bloody brilliant. i can't wait for the sequel to this fic! :p please update soon
8GothyShadowwow that fic was absolutely brilliant. i have just read an extract of sons and lovers, which is bloody brilliant. i can't wait for the sequel to this fic! :p please update soon
6/10/2010 c4 Zed
OK, I'm really, really curious. Which part did you write in your sleep?
OK, I'm really, really curious. Which part did you write in your sleep?
6/7/2010 c4 1Sherlocking
That was hot.
That's all I can say right now, I'm so overwhelmed by the hotness.
X
1SherlockingThat was hot.
That's all I can say right now, I'm so overwhelmed by the hotness.
X
6/6/2010 c4 ireadtoomanybooks
Love it! Some kinks I was like... hm... maybe not, but most of it :D Gorgeous!
Love it! Some kinks I was like... hm... maybe not, but most of it :D Gorgeous!
6/5/2010 c4 Whyisntthereadeleteaccount
(died of chronic nosebleed, soul floating) Thank you, I have died happy.
(died of chronic nosebleed, soul floating) Thank you, I have died happy.
6/4/2010 c4 21Princess Schatje Dreamer
Yea, *coughs* Good thing that you like wet underwear, cause hot damn, I think I creamed myself halfway through the first chapter *embarrased*
But damn, that was... that was... Uh, drool worthy. No, what am I saying, the thought of all the yummyness is enough to make me drool automatically. Just... Damn.
Ok, I'll try to do a proper review later, when I cant think past this bloody nose...
Just... fantastic work.
Now, where did my brain melt off too? *wonders off to find it*
21Princess Schatje DreamerYea, *coughs* Good thing that you like wet underwear, cause hot damn, I think I creamed myself halfway through the first chapter *embarrased*
But damn, that was... that was... Uh, drool worthy. No, what am I saying, the thought of all the yummyness is enough to make me drool automatically. Just... Damn.
Ok, I'll try to do a proper review later, when I cant think past this bloody nose...
Just... fantastic work.
Now, where did my brain melt off too? *wonders off to find it*
6/3/2010 c4 4imagineaworld
Wow... this is awesome... and YES I WANT A SEQUEL!
As to what kinks to put into it, hmmmmmm...
well, i myself got a request the other day, consisting of "jeans + locked belt + cock ring + vibrator" and it hit so many kinks... wow... anyway, this makes me wonder- chastity belt? or denial over several days, or something... that would be nice... well, not nice but wonderful! ;)
anyway, great fic... loved it... XD
4imagineaworldWow... this is awesome... and YES I WANT A SEQUEL!
As to what kinks to put into it, hmmmmmm...
well, i myself got a request the other day, consisting of "jeans + locked belt + cock ring + vibrator" and it hit so many kinks... wow... anyway, this makes me wonder- chastity belt? or denial over several days, or something... that would be nice... well, not nice but wonderful! ;)
anyway, great fic... loved it... XD
6/3/2010 c4 FiggThe3rd
Really good fanfic!
In the sequel/one of them I think they should get out of the BDSM habit or maybe switch around.
I'll keep an eye outt for the sequel!
Katy
Really good fanfic!
In the sequel/one of them I think they should get out of the BDSM habit or maybe switch around.
I'll keep an eye outt for the sequel!
Katy
6/3/2010 c4 17floss bucket
O. M. G. I swear this is the hottest things I have ever read in my life. Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, I went to the next part. I love how you also gave this story at least a little bit of plot (well, context at least), it made it far more believable. I also really really like how you went into a bit of detail about the BDSM culture - made it more interesting that other porn fics :P And don't worry, I wrote the only sex scene I've ever written at school too :P Nothing on this, but same sort of thing... Well, after that mind-blowing awesomely smutty story, I need to go read the prequel! And please please get the next ones up soon? This is amazing!
17floss bucketO. M. G. I swear this is the hottest things I have ever read in my life. Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, I went to the next part. I love how you also gave this story at least a little bit of plot (well, context at least), it made it far more believable. I also really really like how you went into a bit of detail about the BDSM culture - made it more interesting that other porn fics :P And don't worry, I wrote the only sex scene I've ever written at school too :P Nothing on this, but same sort of thing... Well, after that mind-blowing awesomely smutty story, I need to go read the prequel! And please please get the next ones up soon? This is amazing!
6/3/2010 c1 4jka1
I've not read many BDSM stories as its not really my thing but I found this story really interesting (not to mention sexy ;p) looking forward to reading more ^-^
4jka1I've not read many BDSM stories as its not really my thing but I found this story really interesting (not to mention sexy ;p) looking forward to reading more ^-^
6/3/2010 c4 68May Eve
*waves* Hiya. Finally got this posted, huh? And in four chapters, smart. Nice work, as always. Though I am skimming the A/Ns and feeling distinctly underappreciated. *mock glare* Still, this fic is epic and yes, you are going to special hell for this. I might even come visit sometimes. *patpat* ^^ ♥
68May Eve*waves* Hiya. Finally got this posted, huh? And in four chapters, smart. Nice work, as always. Though I am skimming the A/Ns and feeling distinctly underappreciated. *mock glare* Still, this fic is epic and yes, you are going to special hell for this. I might even come visit sometimes. *patpat* ^^ ♥