
6/10/2020 c3 Idk
You want rewiew here is your rewiew
You want rewiew here is your rewiew
10/6/2017 c3 Guest
Please continue!
Please continue!
5/27/2015 c3 Anonymous
This is a great story, but I don't get the parts about Healia, and it is actually spelt Helia. Will you get on with the story already?
This is a great story, but I don't get the parts about Healia, and it is actually spelt Helia. Will you get on with the story already?
6/12/2014 c3 cybercorpsesnake
Hard to follow who's POV it is. It is getting interesting. Keep up the good work.
Hard to follow who's POV it is. It is getting interesting. Keep up the good work.
6/12/2014 c2 cybercorpsesnake
Very interesting chapter. Nice touch of drama at the end. Keep up the good work.
Very interesting chapter. Nice touch of drama at the end. Keep up the good work.
3/24/2012 c3 Guest
Come on! Update! Update! Dis is awesome! This is the second one! Update!
Come on! Update! Update! Dis is awesome! This is the second one! Update!
3/24/2012 c3 Guest
Come on! Update! Update! Dis is awesome!
Come on! Update! Update! Dis is awesome!
10/9/2011 c3 Darcy Trix
great. please continue.
great. please continue.
7/2/2010 c3
5HotdiggityDammit
awsome!im sooooo happy u decided to finish chap 3, but im kinda confused, i know they're fighting, but its kinda hard to read, oh well, i cant wait for stormy to spill it! keep writing!

awsome!im sooooo happy u decided to finish chap 3, but im kinda confused, i know they're fighting, but its kinda hard to read, oh well, i cant wait for stormy to spill it! keep writing!