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It's ok
It's ok
2/14/2015 c3 Guest
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
9/16/2012 c3 
6Mika-the-Shadowbeast
please update! This story is awesome and needs to be updated! So pretty please update!
6Mika-the-Shadowbeastplease update! This story is awesome and needs to be updated! So pretty please update!
7/14/2010 c3 2Kresbo
i really like what you have here at the moment,its a good plot and i would love to see where you take this. so keep it up and i look forward to your next chapter. :D
2Kresboi really like what you have here at the moment,its a good plot and i would love to see where you take this. so keep it up and i look forward to your next chapter. :D
6/9/2010 c2 5Prizm
Cute story so far, Don't listen to people who say others don't like OC stories they like Good OC stories and this is quite good. I think your character is developing just fine for the first two chapters so keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
5PrizmCute story so far, Don't listen to people who say others don't like OC stories they like Good OC stories and this is quite good. I think your character is developing just fine for the first two chapters so keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
6/9/2010 c2 6Tinna Minor
I feel that not many people will respond to this story. Most people don't really like OC stories, but every now and then I pick one up. I blame boredom. What got me into this one was the fact that Megatron is now 'bound' to a human girl. Lots of room for ideas, both Autobot and Decepticon. But really, the OC needs a bit more character development and try to work on the bot and cons personalities. I don't like people messing with the lovable animated characters. But other than that, I look forward to future updates. Keep this going, if you need any help, you can always PM me.
6Tinna MinorI feel that not many people will respond to this story. Most people don't really like OC stories, but every now and then I pick one up. I blame boredom. What got me into this one was the fact that Megatron is now 'bound' to a human girl. Lots of room for ideas, both Autobot and Decepticon. But really, the OC needs a bit more character development and try to work on the bot and cons personalities. I don't like people messing with the lovable animated characters. But other than that, I look forward to future updates. Keep this going, if you need any help, you can always PM me.