for Flavoring7/22/2018 c1 James Birdsong
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5/10/2018 c1 
63general zargon
NICE. This was a great story, and so in-character! The way you wrote Neuro's thoughts were incredible, and I had no trouble imagining this scenario. :D I wish you the best of luck on your writing!
63general zargonNICE. This was a great story, and so in-character! The way you wrote Neuro's thoughts were incredible, and I had no trouble imagining this scenario. :D I wish you the best of luck on your writing!
9/17/2017 c1 31BlueSpiritFire1
What a lovely, well-crafted analytical POV fic, especially from a character who is canonically so out of tune with the type of beings the authors that write him are. You did a brilliant job!
31BlueSpiritFire1What a lovely, well-crafted analytical POV fic, especially from a character who is canonically so out of tune with the type of beings the authors that write him are. You did a brilliant job!
8/4/2017 c1 Guest
Enjoyed reading this.
Enjoyed reading this.
1/21/2017 c1 Guest
amaaazing! so much love for the story and how you wrote the characters. please write more fics
amaaazing! so much love for the story and how you wrote the characters. please write more fics
12/3/2016 c1 72Schermionie
This is such a charming story. Neuro compromising and trying to overcome the gaps of understanding, and Yako doing the same. I love how you've captured their bond - so real and dynamic. Neuro's thought process felt real, too.
My favourite line is one of the early ones about how Neuro had 'launched Yako into speaking about human emotions', because of course this can have a completely innocent meaning, but knowing Neuro he may well have actually launched her at the wall. :'D
72SchermionieThis is such a charming story. Neuro compromising and trying to overcome the gaps of understanding, and Yako doing the same. I love how you've captured their bond - so real and dynamic. Neuro's thought process felt real, too.
My favourite line is one of the early ones about how Neuro had 'launched Yako into speaking about human emotions', because of course this can have a completely innocent meaning, but knowing Neuro he may well have actually launched her at the wall. :'D
5/31/2016 c1 Guest
Haha! I loved the last line! The rest of the story was good too, but the last line was like the cherry on top.
Haha! I loved the last line! The rest of the story was good too, but the last line was like the cherry on top.
9/3/2010 c1 9DuskTillDawn95
naww that was cute ^.^ and a very good idea! :3 i enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of your writing soon! :D
9DuskTillDawn95naww that was cute ^.^ and a very good idea! :3 i enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of your writing soon! :D
8/29/2010 c1 12Groves of the Pass'd
Hello! This is the first story I've ever read for MTNN here on FanFiction, and I have to say that I love it! It is so adorable and sweet :)
12Groves of the Pass'dHello! This is the first story I've ever read for MTNN here on FanFiction, and I have to say that I love it! It is so adorable and sweet :)
6/9/2010 c1 1lovezero
This is SO cute! I love the adorableness Neuro's personality takes on in this story! Like a lost cat. Lol XD Lost cat Neuro! XD Anyhoo, awesome story! I love it! XD
1lovezeroThis is SO cute! I love the adorableness Neuro's personality takes on in this story! Like a lost cat. Lol XD Lost cat Neuro! XD Anyhoo, awesome story! I love it! XD
6/6/2010 c1 Liz
Wow, I really like the idea of emotions being the reason that earth mysteries are so tasty to Neuro! Very cool idea, and very likely.
Neuro was a BIT ooc [since he would never have stayed on the floor unless he was unconsious or dead] but the over all story was awesome. Loved it :)
Wow, I really like the idea of emotions being the reason that earth mysteries are so tasty to Neuro! Very cool idea, and very likely.
Neuro was a BIT ooc [since he would never have stayed on the floor unless he was unconsious or dead] but the over all story was awesome. Loved it :)