12/30/2013 c2 Guest
James: didn't the other ph tell u?
Rph: tell me what?
James...-3- I'm his toy not urs
Rph: naw y does he get all the good toys?
James: *le shrug* oh btw henry is Walters bitch
Henry: SINCE WHEN?!
Walter: since now *le throes henry over his shoulder and runs*
Ph:*le throws James over shoulder* ok that's enough! Let's go James
Rph:*le stands aqurdly in middle of the room* :P lol wut?

5/17/2013 c5 Gananimal
Really nice I never thought of a silent hill fanfic this way, it's interesting in how you included all the characters.

4/7/2013 c5 shiko
i dont care what people say i love this fanfiction! 3
will you please write more? :D
this is awesome 333333

12/15/2012 c1 Dill Gherkin
"I don't ride the meat pole!"
Thank you. Thank you very much.
I didn't know that one, and I'm so very glad you gave me a chance to learn it.
Someday, I will use that.

On another note, a simple spell check and a twice over can easily eliminate small errors that lower quaility greatly. 'Gripping the pillowd'? Stuff like that. Also, the pace it a bit too much, slow things down. You cram too many things into paragraphs.

10/12/2012 c5 Guest
More lewd.

8/2/2012 c5 11I-Really-Love-Pans
Does anyone find PH hot? Or am I weird?

7/22/2012 c5 Silver
That was great. well done, write more soon

6/10/2012 c5 Lovingdisease
I loved this...I'm a major perv and this was just simply amazing xD