for Famiglia6/20/2010 c4 Lily of Tuckborough
loved the chappie ^_^ very intriguing and it was a decent length as well! I am even more excited to find out how Tsuna deals with everything that's going on and I am loving Reborn's nudges. I love the Reborn/Tsuna family relationship so this is pretty awesome too :D
loved the chappie ^_^ very intriguing and it was a decent length as well! I am even more excited to find out how Tsuna deals with everything that's going on and I am loving Reborn's nudges. I love the Reborn/Tsuna family relationship so this is pretty awesome too :D
6/20/2010 c4 
10doremishine itsuko
wow i have to say i didnt expected that is realy interesting but i will like see moore tsuna kissing with enma you know making out not with that girl sakura i hate her already and ther friends must be really serious know i didnt know they use the box weapons thats not fair because thats one of the strongest forms to vongola family fight im so angry with that... but is a wonderfull story when you have time update aaaa at least enma with tsuna i love that..ya nee
itsuko chan.
10doremishine itsukowow i have to say i didnt expected that is realy interesting but i will like see moore tsuna kissing with enma you know making out not with that girl sakura i hate her already and ther friends must be really serious know i didnt know they use the box weapons thats not fair because thats one of the strongest forms to vongola family fight im so angry with that... but is a wonderfull story when you have time update aaaa at least enma with tsuna i love that..ya nee
itsuko chan.
6/14/2010 c3 41Reidluver
This is quite the interesting story, and I'm dying to read what happens next. ^_^ This is progressing wonderfully and I think that you did a fine job with Tsuna and Hibari in this chapter. It was fine. However, I think that the large amount of Japanese words is throwing off the flow of the story. I can figure out the gist of what some of them are, but I have to wait until the end to see for sure.
41ReidluverThis is quite the interesting story, and I'm dying to read what happens next. ^_^ This is progressing wonderfully and I think that you did a fine job with Tsuna and Hibari in this chapter. It was fine. However, I think that the large amount of Japanese words is throwing off the flow of the story. I can figure out the gist of what some of them are, but I have to wait until the end to see for sure.
6/13/2010 c3 Lily of Tuckborough
:D sugoi! I fell in love with it at the first! I don't particularly think that the Hibari/Tsuna conversation was OOC. Working with Hibari is very! risky in a fanfic but you put in just enough effort in him being himself that I could see him acting like this :) I was actually relieved to see this rare piece of work with the characters acting like themselves. Good Job! Keep updating and I shall keep reviewing!
:D sugoi! I fell in love with it at the first! I don't particularly think that the Hibari/Tsuna conversation was OOC. Working with Hibari is very! risky in a fanfic but you put in just enough effort in him being himself that I could see him acting like this :) I was actually relieved to see this rare piece of work with the characters acting like themselves. Good Job! Keep updating and I shall keep reviewing!
6/13/2010 c3 17Zessei
I like your story so far and I'm interested to see where you take it but I do have one small suggestion; skip the random Japanese words. You use them correctly, which is nice, but they are distracting and add nothing to the story. I agree with the use of honorifics but otherwise it just seems like you're trying to show off or that you're trying too hard.
-Zessei
17ZesseiI like your story so far and I'm interested to see where you take it but I do have one small suggestion; skip the random Japanese words. You use them correctly, which is nice, but they are distracting and add nothing to the story. I agree with the use of honorifics but otherwise it just seems like you're trying to show off or that you're trying too hard.
-Zessei
6/13/2010 c3 10doremishine itsuko
kyaaaaaa tsuna is so cool i love this fanfic please update soon and make sure that my enma kun and tsuna kun be together really wow is so awesome i really enjoy this fanfic dont forget update for your fans...
itsukochan.
and wow the way tsuna kun fighht with does guys kakoi really i was so excited and the way you put is so enchanting i love it please update soon and thankyu for answer my question before...
10doremishine itsukokyaaaaaa tsuna is so cool i love this fanfic please update soon and make sure that my enma kun and tsuna kun be together really wow is so awesome i really enjoy this fanfic dont forget update for your fans...
itsukochan.
and wow the way tsuna kun fighht with does guys kakoi really i was so excited and the way you put is so enchanting i love it please update soon and thankyu for answer my question before...
6/9/2010 c2 21THISISNOT
Ah... a few typos here and here. you spelt Chrome's name as crome at one part, and there were also a few grammatical errors. Thank you for such a nice chapter! ^^
21THISISNOTAh... a few typos here and here. you spelt Chrome's name as crome at one part, and there were also a few grammatical errors. Thank you for such a nice chapter! ^^
6/7/2010 c2 Skymory
Aww, i can totally see Dino giving Tsuna the kick in the butt that he needed cuz they're so similar. I can't wait to see Tsuna take his rightful place as boss. Keep up the good work ^^
Aww, i can totally see Dino giving Tsuna the kick in the butt that he needed cuz they're so similar. I can't wait to see Tsuna take his rightful place as boss. Keep up the good work ^^
6/7/2010 c2 10doremishine itsuko
ne what happens to tsunayoshy he is not hurt right i hope no interesting story and mysterious too enma is gonna be there with tsu kun i like this coule i hope both families and tsunayoshixenma be alright update soon good fanfic i like it
att..itsuko chan.
10doremishine itsukone what happens to tsunayoshy he is not hurt right i hope no interesting story and mysterious too enma is gonna be there with tsu kun i like this coule i hope both families and tsunayoshixenma be alright update soon good fanfic i like it
att..itsuko chan.