for Final Thoughts6/7/2010 c1 
88lostmoonchild
*claps* Yay, you made a sequal! Sorry if I sound a little out of it, I had an riding accident a couple of days ago and ended up having to go to the clinic today. I liked the story, I really did since you could tell their hopes and fears. My brain did a "huh?" moment though in the first paragraph cause you put "fore" instead of "fire" but we're all human. Seriously happy you made another one though :D
88lostmoonchild*claps* Yay, you made a sequal! Sorry if I sound a little out of it, I had an riding accident a couple of days ago and ended up having to go to the clinic today. I liked the story, I really did since you could tell their hopes and fears. My brain did a "huh?" moment though in the first paragraph cause you put "fore" instead of "fire" but we're all human. Seriously happy you made another one though :D