for What A Player!7/14/2015 c2 aaliyah
Sorry to sound mean but edward got annoying. Bella has always been a little annoying but I'm used to it. But otherwise brilliant.
Sorry to sound mean but edward got annoying. Bella has always been a little annoying but I'm used to it. But otherwise brilliant.
110/30/2011 c12 Tinkrbell23
Oh please don't quit on this story! I love it! Please don't quit. This was a good chapter even though it was kinda short. U have to believe in ur writting. We do. Bella make him wok for it girl! Lol don't let him think he's gonna win
Oh please don't quit on this story! I love it! Please don't quit. This was a good chapter even though it was kinda short. U have to believe in ur writting. We do. Bella make him wok for it girl! Lol don't let him think he's gonna win
10/30/2011 c10 Tinkrbell23
Wow! That was great! I loved how she seen the camera there. I was a lil worried.
Wow! That was great! I loved how she seen the camera there. I was a lil worried.
10/29/2011 c8 Tinkrbell23
I'm lovin this story. The games Bella plays w Edward r funny. And his reactions r so funny! I love it!
I'm lovin this story. The games Bella plays w Edward r funny. And his reactions r so funny! I love it!
10/29/2011 c7 Tinkrbell23
Her number? Her number? What is Bella planning? I liked this chapter. Edward blushing is cute. Lol
Her number? Her number? What is Bella planning? I liked this chapter. Edward blushing is cute. Lol
10/29/2011 c5 Tinkrbell23
Ha ha this is gonna be good! Oh emmett I can't believe ge licked the toliet bowl so gross! I wasn't expecting jasper to really smack esmes ass. Priceless! Lol
Ha ha this is gonna be good! Oh emmett I can't believe ge licked the toliet bowl so gross! I wasn't expecting jasper to really smack esmes ass. Priceless! Lol
10/28/2011 c4 Tinkrbell23
My fav part is when Bella says she doesn't want to get in line at all w the other girls. Lol Edwards reaction was funny.
My fav part is when Bella says she doesn't want to get in line at all w the other girls. Lol Edwards reaction was funny.
10/28/2011 c3 Tinkrbell23
Hit! I like it. More points for bella! Wow I can't believe there was a line of girls waitin to make out w him. What a jerk.
Hit! I like it. More points for bella! Wow I can't believe there was a line of girls waitin to make out w him. What a jerk.
10/28/2011 c2 Tinkrbell23
Wow Edward. Wow. Lol that was cheesy. I can't wait for his reaction when she turns him down. That's gonna be funny.
Wow Edward. Wow. Lol that was cheesy. I can't wait for his reaction when she turns him down. That's gonna be funny.