for lost dreams12/28/2010 c1 Emily
I was given that assignment too.it broke my heart to write. I know that u probaly don't want to hear some random person go on about a sad time so I'll cut it short I lost my father to war.
I was given that assignment too.it broke my heart to write. I know that u probaly don't want to hear some random person go on about a sad time so I'll cut it short I lost my father to war.
6/10/2010 c1 
5FanficMogul
Nice thought, bad English. Brush up ur language. It spoilt half your wonderful theme.
Without, not with out; write not wright in this context. Many more are there. Take help from someone to correct it.
5FanficMogulNice thought, bad English. Brush up ur language. It spoilt half your wonderful theme.
Without, not with out; write not wright in this context. Many more are there. Take help from someone to correct it.