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7/15/2010 c1 14Katydid43
Nice job! It could be either Sam or Dean you're describing, with the other one, coming to the rescue and making the other one feel safe. Very clever!
6/11/2010 c1 230KKBELVIS
100 words is not always easy to get and produce a clear image.

You did that perfectly in this piece.

I love it!

Of course, I pictured Sam as the one with the 'white hot pain'.

Dean there for him.

This is a great spring board for a full-on story! Hint hint..he he.

Thanks so much.

Karen

PS: Great title, too!
6/8/2010 c1 77sweetysmart0505
I'm assuming we get to choose are own POV here. I'd say this was Dean with Sam's hand on his chest. Great drabble! And writer's block's a b*tch ain't it!
6/8/2010 c1 35Impaladreams
A lovely depiction of the boys relationship, I like how it worked for either of our boys.

Lovley drabble

Jane x
6/8/2010 c1 212DeansBabyBird
Hey Hun.

Welcome back. It's a nice return. DBB xx
6/8/2010 c1 396Amberdreams
Nice hurt comfort - and who was it? Does it matter? Nope...
6/8/2010 c1 83sammygirl1963
Awesome drabble, but you can't just leave it there. You have to continue. We need to know which brother is hurt and how it happened!
6/8/2010 c1 95VeekaIzhanez
so cute (repyl)

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