
6/16/2011 c20
6ILoveDamon99
Fella 4ever!
(Fella =Finn and Bella!)
In the sequel make it end in Finn and Bella together please!

Fella 4ever!
(Fella =Finn and Bella!)
In the sequel make it end in Finn and Bella together please!
10/23/2010 c19 feeshfeesh
I'm sorry but where was all the punctuation? I couldn't tell where one speach ended and another began :|
I'm sorry but where was all the punctuation? I couldn't tell where one speach ended and another began :|
9/15/2010 c2
2MorganaElenaLeFay
I can't imagine it being any way but Bella and Edward. I like the story, it's well done, but I'm not sure I like the idea of Bella being with anyone else.
I gotta read the next chapter and see what happens.

I can't imagine it being any way but Bella and Edward. I like the story, it's well done, but I'm not sure I like the idea of Bella being with anyone else.
I gotta read the next chapter and see what happens.
9/15/2010 c1 MorganaElenaLeFay
He can't do that! He can't ask someone to reverse time to keep Bella from hurting! It's not fair to either of them! I like this chapter, I'm definitely going to keep reading.
He can't do that! He can't ask someone to reverse time to keep Bella from hurting! It's not fair to either of them! I like this chapter, I'm definitely going to keep reading.
6/8/2010 c1 lexi
it's good go on lyrics
it's good go on lyrics
6/8/2010 c1 lol
Nice longer please your driving me nuts!
Nice longer please your driving me nuts!