for One Day5/7/2014 c5 Guest
Edward's such a child isn't he? I loved seeing Jazz smack him down a little. I think it's good that Leah told a little if her history. Talking therapy with fighting therapy.
Edward's such a child isn't he? I loved seeing Jazz smack him down a little. I think it's good that Leah told a little if her history. Talking therapy with fighting therapy.
5/6/2014 c5 
32Louey06
this was good. i didn't like the part with Edward but the conversation between leah and jasper was great.
32Louey06this was good. i didn't like the part with Edward but the conversation between leah and jasper was great.
5/6/2014 c5 Guest
The Cullens and their ridiculously hypocritical "compassion" is either amusing or frustrating for me so I loved seeing them through Jasper's jaded eyes. Excellent update I loved it!
The Cullens and their ridiculously hypocritical "compassion" is either amusing or frustrating for me so I loved seeing them through Jasper's jaded eyes. Excellent update I loved it!
5/6/2014 c5 Inosolan
You captured really well how stunted and odd the Cullens are in their way. I liked seeing the friendship build for Leah and Jasper. Very fun update and I'm so glad you're back!
You captured really well how stunted and odd the Cullens are in their way. I liked seeing the friendship build for Leah and Jasper. Very fun update and I'm so glad you're back!
5/6/2014 c5 50Cinderfire16akaThundertheWolf
Yay! You updated! Did you find a new beta or do all that on your own? Leah's question was not what I thought it would be and neither was Jasper's. I find it weird how whenever there's a story with Jasper as the main character, Edward, Carlisle and Esme always seem to become the enemy somehow. Don't you think it's kind of weird? And cliche? Grantee that happens in my stories too but I guess it depends on the circumstance. What comes next?
Cinderfire
50Cinderfire16akaThundertheWolfYay! You updated! Did you find a new beta or do all that on your own? Leah's question was not what I thought it would be and neither was Jasper's. I find it weird how whenever there's a story with Jasper as the main character, Edward, Carlisle and Esme always seem to become the enemy somehow. Don't you think it's kind of weird? And cliche? Grantee that happens in my stories too but I guess it depends on the circumstance. What comes next?
Cinderfire
5/1/2013 c4 32Louey06
this was a great chapter. I like to see that he two of them are connecting on a more intellectual basis now. Not all just fighting. I can't wait to see the kinds of questions that they'll ask. this should be great! Please update soon!
32Louey06this was a great chapter. I like to see that he two of them are connecting on a more intellectual basis now. Not all just fighting. I can't wait to see the kinds of questions that they'll ask. this should be great! Please update soon!
3/25/2013 c3 Louey06
I really like this story. a great way for them both to release stress. grrwat job i hope I see more!
I really like this story. a great way for them both to release stress. grrwat job i hope I see more!
2/18/2013 c3 Cinderfire16akaThundertheWolf
Why is he baiting her so...? They fight like cats and dogs. Or two first graders with a secret crush. It's so funny! And why is he doing all this again? What do the others have to say about it? Keep writing, because this to me is a breath of fresh air. Leah doesn't get much of that, now does she?
Cinderfire
Why is he baiting her so...? They fight like cats and dogs. Or two first graders with a secret crush. It's so funny! And why is he doing all this again? What do the others have to say about it? Keep writing, because this to me is a breath of fresh air. Leah doesn't get much of that, now does she?
Cinderfire
2/11/2013 c3 theclassyfangirl01
very intriguing. i love their banter and the set of emotions between them. unique and different.
very intriguing. i love their banter and the set of emotions between them. unique and different.
2/9/2013 c3 Guest
I like this. I'm a fan of Jasper/Leah romances, but then being friends would be cool too
I like this. I'm a fan of Jasper/Leah romances, but then being friends would be cool too