for A Whole New Beginning11/6/2013 c3 LavLav16
Wow... Awesome! Rick Riordan should have consulted you when he was writing TLT
Wow... Awesome! Rick Riordan should have consulted you when he was writing TLT
10/7/2010 c4 
4Annabella Prinx
Wow! I really like it, it was kind of so much fast told, but I like it...it is like a new beginning for our so loved story PJO! I don't really can think why someone would make a flame for a good story like this! I like what Annabeth said: "Please don't let it be true." it makes it sound as if there is starting a Percabethy feeling! or at least I think so!
Love ya,
Annabella
4Annabella PrinxWow! I really like it, it was kind of so much fast told, but I like it...it is like a new beginning for our so loved story PJO! I don't really can think why someone would make a flame for a good story like this! I like what Annabeth said: "Please don't let it be true." it makes it sound as if there is starting a Percabethy feeling! or at least I think so!
Love ya,
Annabella
8/28/2010 c3 15Abigail Thalia La Rue
FLAMES are fun, i like fire. but i LOVE this story, it's EPIC! please never ever stop writing.
Love,
Abby R.B.
15Abigail Thalia La RueFLAMES are fun, i like fire. but i LOVE this story, it's EPIC! please never ever stop writing.
Love,
Abby R.B.
6/13/2010 c4 Guest
awseome
awseome
6/11/2010 c4 angelica
this is great i loved all the chapters. i hope you right more of pjo
this is great i loved all the chapters. i hope you right more of pjo
6/11/2010 c4 no one in particular
When Percy arrives at Camp Half-Blood I feel that there should have been more of a... I don't know. Just more. It seems like it happened so suddenly. I'm known for reading fast, and sometimes I'll accidentally skip some important information like maybe... Percy's camp arrival. I'll be "blunt and to the point" as you say Mr. Brunner, or Chiron, is. I also think that the Laistrygonian was not described quite right. I don't know how I would change that, I just know it's not right. And what is happening at camp? I never found out.
When Percy arrives at Camp Half-Blood I feel that there should have been more of a... I don't know. Just more. It seems like it happened so suddenly. I'm known for reading fast, and sometimes I'll accidentally skip some important information like maybe... Percy's camp arrival. I'll be "blunt and to the point" as you say Mr. Brunner, or Chiron, is. I also think that the Laistrygonian was not described quite right. I don't know how I would change that, I just know it's not right. And what is happening at camp? I never found out.
6/10/2010 c4 asdfjkl
I like ur story! It's awesome, and it has an interesting plot! Keep up the great work!
I like ur story! It's awesome, and it has an interesting plot! Keep up the great work!
6/9/2010 c2 3the city in love
The writing isn't bad. Keep it going and maybe something good will come out of this.
3the city in loveThe writing isn't bad. Keep it going and maybe something good will come out of this.
6/8/2010 c1 Midnight Sol
If your trying to be funny, It's not working.
Don't post until you have an real story. Otherwise, your just wasting space and time.
If your trying to be funny, It's not working.
Don't post until you have an real story. Otherwise, your just wasting space and time.
6/8/2010 c1 10singingtothewind
You know this is what the summary is for? How about you try posting the actual story? I'm not trying to sound mean, but I'm pretty sure you're not supposed to do this according to the TOS!
10singingtothewindYou know this is what the summary is for? How about you try posting the actual story? I'm not trying to sound mean, but I'm pretty sure you're not supposed to do this according to the TOS!
6/8/2010 c1 Silverwings495
Where is the one shot? I thought this was the text in the story's summary.
Scarlet Hunter
Where is the one shot? I thought this was the text in the story's summary.
Scarlet Hunter