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2/7/2019 c1 Guest
HNNNGGGG! Too cute... x.x
9/17/2017 c1 Nino
ooooooh this is awesome! continue pleaseeeeeee! XD
11/29/2014 c1 2FlammenTaenzerinSuzaku
Makoto and Rei's reactions are awesome. You did really well here. I also like you explanations abou the timeline and the changes. I personally think you can have anything happening in a story, so long as you explain it logically. For time travel I think of it as a one way. You travel to the past but can't go to a bettered future or only to the one you left in the first place snd try to change that one(like in Dragonball Z with Trunks). Do you think so as well?
6/19/2010 c1 1MariaSabaku
That was great! :] I absolutely loved it! *sighs*

I also blinked when Makoto and Rei's kids were shown! LOL!

There was one thing I wasn't so sure of though...

When Setsuna's kids came out..who was her partner? Was it Mamoru?

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